January 14th, 2013 at 04:48pm
A Beauty in Disguise - Comments
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This story is soooo good i NEED MORE NOW!!!!!!!! i really do like this storyJanuary 14th, 2013 at 06:10am
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i just rye don chapter 10 its soooo good and soooo sad great job :) (although im only on chapter 10)January 14th, 2013 at 06:03am
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So.. i like the idea of the story.. but i am just not so keen on the whole emo thing... ugh.. anyways, it made me laugh a little ( the whole suicidale tendencies band thing cause it is a real band but it's more of a punk/hardcore thing and also the fallen angels just sounds a bit childish to me i dunno).. besides that, you have little errors which is good though maybe slowing down a bit and being a bit more clear on who is who.. after a while I just got lost in who was the prep and who the 'emo' kid.. i dunno.. and also, maybe try not to repeat yourself so much, i think that would help :)
besides that, good job and keep it up. and i hope i don't sound like a bitch, it's just my opinion :/ no harm intended.June 8th, 2012 at 08:18pm -
I like the way you brought her ex back into it, very good! :)June 6th, 2012 at 10:07pm
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A very good story lines. A few discrepancies if I want to be really picky but other than that very good so far!May 1st, 2012 at 10:08pm
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I actually can't believe no one else has commented -.- anyway update soon :) xMay 1st, 2012 at 10:04pm
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Very original :) I love the way this is written, update soon! :3 xApril 26th, 2012 at 10:01pm
Lauren x