September 7th, 2012 at 06:44am
I apologize for taking so long to comment. :/
I'm going to start off with the layout--it's so fitting to the story, and I'm in love with it. It gives off such an eerie vibe to the story, and that's so important when writing and reading a horror story. I like the way everything matches and fits together, with the story content color and the background and the banner.
I haven't read a horror story in a while, so I'm very excited about this. You can sense the terror, but it doesn't have to have blood--just the whole...creepiness of it all. That makes it very memorable and worth-while to read. I'm curious to how the plot is going to turn out, considering I read 2 chapters for the comment swap.
I'll definitely be finishing this. I like the light description it has. It gives a vague image in mind, but it also leaves a lot to the reader's imagination. This really has potential, and you are a fantastic writer. Keep it up! :)
Late response.
But actually, I used a real map as reference so everything is geographically correct. ;)