Great job on this! I loved it, everything about this was just amazing.
The song and picture fit perfectly in the plot! The way you introduced Zacky during her class, was just awesome. I also liked how you didn't tell who exactly was watching her, but instead you put in small details that gave small clues as to who was the killer. And even though Zack was a killer, he still was a sweetheart at the beginning. I actually loved how you explain how she was killed. But I would of liked a little more horror in the story. Other than that, it was a great story.
No grammar errors, nothing like that. Though I had a little trouble in the beginning. I'm not sure if you noticed but sometimes it was 'Alyx' to 'Alyc'. I don't know if you meant it to be like that, but it doesn't really matter, just something extra. Plus I really like that name, pretty unique! Anyway, thank you for entering the contest, I really enjoyed your entry and again thank you.
The song and picture fit perfectly in the plot! The way you introduced Zacky during her class, was just awesome. I also liked how you didn't tell who exactly was watching her, but instead you put in small details that gave small clues as to who was the killer. And even though Zack was a killer, he still was a sweetheart at the beginning. I actually loved how you explain how she was killed. But I would of liked a little more horror in the story. Other than that, it was a great story.
No grammar errors, nothing like that. Though I had a little trouble in the beginning. I'm not sure if you noticed but sometimes it was 'Alyx' to 'Alyc'. I don't know if you meant it to be like that, but it doesn't really matter, just something extra. Plus I really like that name, pretty unique! Anyway, thank you for entering the contest, I really enjoyed your entry and again thank you.