ahhhhhhh this is perfect!! first time writing smut?? ur a natural ;)) First brusnop ive read and oh shit i think this will be the best one ill ever read T_T sequel?? xxxxxx
This story is amazing and I absolutley love it! Your writing style is great, dialoge flows nicely, and there are few to no gramatical errors. Even though Ben and Danny act OOC sometimes, they act like real people. This is epic and awesome and wonderful, so I shall be subscribing(: Update soon!
That was perfect, hun!!! it was just the right amount of smut this early into the story. Always leave us wanting more, and that's definitely what you've done! Update soon!!
*wolf whistle* hot damn! If that is not a wake up call for danny. I don't know what will be. But then again, this could turn out so many ways.. And good first try! Good chapter and I'm looking forward to even more - hopefully soon.