Oh dear god! you're s freaking lucky ! xD hahah seeing you two would have been awesome to see >.< haha well great update. I hope you can update more often!
Awesome! I love this story, very interested to see what's gonna happen with Val and when Matt will realise what everyone else has already worked out!!
A couple of bits of constuctive critisism:
Firstly, somethimes your grammar is a bit off, such as not capitalising the beginning of speech or putting full stops or commas at the end of speech before you put the closing speech marks.
Secondly, as much as I love what you've written and the speech really defines the characters well, I wonder if you could include more description, especially when Shylo is talking about or to Matt, just to truly highlight how much she really likes him.
Overall though, I love your idea here and I am definitely subscribing as I haven't read many A7X fics!