A Little Piece of Heaven - Comments

  • Total Nightmare

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    I'm really liking this! :D Please keep updating!
    September 14th, 2012 at 02:18am
  • owlsongs1989

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    Nice chapter :D
    September 10th, 2012 at 03:09am
  • october-ninja

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    I really like this story update soon
    p.s. Val is a bitch
    September 3rd, 2012 at 09:46am
  • gothique4

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    oh damn this chapter was just hilarious. I've got a mental image of Jimmy on a unicycle now lol
    September 3rd, 2012 at 04:28am
  • owlsongs1989

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    Matt is so adorable. Love this story. Please update soon :D
    July 12th, 2012 at 04:27am
  • antivist.

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    Oh dear god! you're s freaking lucky ! xD
    hahah seeing you two would have been awesome to see >.< haha well great update. I hope you can update more often!
    July 9th, 2012 at 08:41pm
  • jly94

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    Awesome! I love this story, very interested to see what's gonna happen with Val and when Matt will realise what everyone else has already worked out!!

    A couple of bits of constuctive critisism:

    Firstly, somethimes your grammar is a bit off, such as not capitalising the beginning of speech or putting full stops or commas at the end of speech before you put the closing speech marks.

    Secondly, as much as I love what you've written and the speech really defines the characters well, I wonder if you could include more description, especially when Shylo is talking about or to Matt, just to truly highlight how much she really likes him.

    Overall though, I love your idea here and I am definitely subscribing as I haven't read many A7X fics!

    Jen xx
    June 20th, 2012 at 05:03pm
  • sketchawkward

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    I just read all4 chapters and I liked it from the very first one please continue! And go check my story theres a new one up!
    May 27th, 2012 at 07:36am
  • antivist.

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    Yay an update
    :D <- My face when I get updates from stories I really like, like this one :3
    May 21st, 2012 at 06:13pm
  • antivist.

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    One word: CONTINUE IT, CONTINUE IT! :D (Ups, those were more than a word xD)
    May 18th, 2012 at 05:36pm
  • Star Angel

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    More soon please
    May 18th, 2012 at 02:07am
  • JellyBeans1666

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    Woo Comments!!! :) I feel like I know a bit more on Matt and Val's relationship.
    May 17th, 2012 at 06:23pm
  • Star Angel

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    more more more please
    May 5th, 2012 at 10:19am
  • KellShadows

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    Really like the story so far, I hope you up-date again soon! =)
    April 28th, 2012 at 03:53am