Green-Eyed Monster - Comments

I wanted to read, and you were the last person to comment on my profile, so you were my victim.

I'm one of YOUR favourite authors? Are you kidding? You're amazing!

This... I loved this. It was written beautifully, it flowed amazingly, it was believable despite the fact that we all know Zacky would never do such things. My heart raced when hers did, and I found myself holding my breath more often than not, wondering what was coming next.

Seriously, words can't express how much I loved this. I know it's only a two shot, but it feels like you told and entire story in just that short amount of time. I felt like I'd watched it all from the beginning - from the time they got married right up until Matt mad the discovery. And that's not an easy thing to achieve in so few words, so nicely done!

I also love that the ending is completely open, left to the imagination. The story could proceed in any way from there - she could get back with Zacky, who'd either continue to be an ass or right his wrongs, or she could start a new life for herself. It's all completely up to the reader, and I love that.

I wish there were words, but there aren't. If we had to rate things, I'd give this a 11/10. No joke. It's amazing.

Definitely going to be recommending this, and you, and checking out the other story you have posted!

xoxo
HJ.

This was great! Good job :D

Your story was amazing. I loved it. :D

This was so...I can't even think of the right word. I loved it. Still kind of hoping Matt and Brian would have beat Zacky bloody but that's okay :P This was amazing hun. I have no idea what you were so worried about! Definite win, right here.