Love Through a Lens - Comments

I love what you have going on here. I remember high school really well and I won't lie there were a number of guys I had my eyes on secretly (some were friends, that I was to shy to say anything about and others were popular and since I was a nerd, I kept them to myself) all of which I regret.

I love your descriptions, they are very detailed and in a way you can actually imagine it. Keep up the writing, you are really good :)

Comment swap brought me to your story, and I'm so happy it did. I couldn’t get enough of the words you have written. I loved reading the chapters. I think you're a talented writer, and I wanted it to never end.
At first, I was a little upset how short the chapters were, but as I kept reading they were perfect. I think they would get boring if the chapters were lengthy, even the longer one you have is perfect. I love that every chapter is different, it doesn't rehash anything and we learn something new in every chapter.
I am very curious to see how this will play out, so I will, for sure, subscribe to this.
The only thing I slightly had a problem with was the long paragraphs. Sometimes I would get lost in them, and have to re-read them, but that may be just me.
I also have never read a story like this one, and I think that's why I enjoyed it so much.
I'm not sure when you updated this, but I hope you keep updating it. It's unique and I really enjoyed reading all the chapters.
Even though you haven't described Valerie completely, I can vision her and KC so well.
Keep up the good work!

I think it is just precious how Valerie is so infatuated by KC even though she knows nothing about him. It is just a very high school thing to do and I love how real that portion of the story is! I really like that she keeps the pictures of him hidden because she knows that if he saw them he would probably freak out on her. I also really love that these chapters were nice and short, and were all the same length. It made the story look very well put together and also made it easier for me to read!

Your story captures the people wonderfully. I love they way you describe KC and how Valerie thinks of him. Your atmosphere is also described very well. I can get a picture of it in my head. Whether it's warm or cold, bright or dark, and sweet smelling or pungent. It is so heart breaking when she find outs he has a girlfriend. :'( You have a very beautiful layout as well. I have no idea how to use the layout system in Mibba since I'm new but yours looks so wonderful I might just give it another try. I didn't find anything wrong in the grammer or spelling. Very well written and engaging story. I kinda know how Valerie feels when she doesn't tell her friend even though they have been bff's for a long time. I have a friend like that and I have kept things from even though we are close. Those emotions of guilt, that somebody in that situation would usually try to smother, you have captured them perfectly.

The story's written very well and you describe KC great!

First of I thought your layout was just gorgeous! The first chapter really got me interested to know what else was going to happen and your details throughout the story were great, and you're description of KC in the photographs was also really good.

I was really surprised when she found out he had a girlfriend and the feelings you described that she had about it were really realistic. I also liked that the chapters were rather short and to the point. You also have some really nice metaphors, my favorite being ‘he was a dream in sepia’. The fact that the story centers about photography also made me love this even more.

I didn't see any spelling or grammar mistakes and I would really like to read more of this! Overall great job.

This is beautifully written. I love how you express the characters with such detail. (: I can honestly say I love this story.

Freaking amazing. Why have you not updated this yet. MOLLY. UPDATE!!! im dying!

This story is amazing, no joke. Update soon, please!

I found this story because of the review on the Mibba homepage. The second I realised it was about photography (in a way), I knew I had to read, as I'm a student of photography myself. ;)

Firstly, this makes me wish I'd been more into photography back in high school, because I would have loved to walk around just taking pictures of everybody. And I love this infatuation she has with K.C., all because of that first, perfect photograph. It's beautiful.

Your writing style is gorgeous and I just can't get enough of this already. I usually don't like super-short chapters, but it definitely works for this story, and it gave me time to read before I go to work - so I guess I can't complain about that!

But now I really do have to go and get ready, so I'll leave this comment here. But I'm instantly subscribing and recommending, and I can't wait to see more of this. =)

And just as a random side-note, I own the same camera as the one in your header picture. XD

xoxo
HJ.

GAHHH!!!!! I love this! THis is absolutely brillant! The review article on this story interested me and when I came to read it, I was amazed. I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm sad that the chapters are short but they're really good and well written.

I love this! And what a cliffhanger, so not cool. ;) I hope to see an update soon; this is a very unique and well written story.

This is an awesome story! It's very well-written and there's never a dull moment. But one thing bothered me: how does she know his name is KC? It never says how she found out, so that's kinda been bugging me.

But other than that, I'm totally in love with this story, and I can't wait for more!

Oh nice! Permission to be a fucking creeper.
Awesome!

update soon please and thank you

oh man poor Valerie =[ I feel for her so much. She adores KC so much and she's so upset about him having a girlfriend. I'm sitting here waiting for more like it'll pop up out of nowhere (wishful thinking). I hope they end up together so much. Beautiful sweet writing.

Banner: I love the banner. I mean, it fits perfectly for the story and it's amazing.
The layout: I love it. It give me kind of a summery feeling.
The story content: I love how the chapters weren't too long or too short. Like, they weren't too long and it didn't get to the point where I got tired of reading one chapter because it was too long. I really enjoyed it.

Your layout is absolutely adorable for this story. It fits the mood perfectly. I really like your summary – very short and simple. It definitely got my attention. I especially liked how you played with the word “see.”

Now on to the story, in the first chapter, I really love the way you described everything. I especially love this line - The flakes were large and watery, falling as slowly and softly as cotton. It’s very….bouyant haha. I also love the way you describe the picture of KC that Valerie took of him the first time she met him. It was beautifully written and I enjoyed reading it.

My eyes widen when I read that KC had a girlfriend. I love that Valerie checked Facebook to make sure it was true. That made me smile because it made the story even more real because I know a lot of girls, including myself, who check Facebook to see the relationship status of others to make sure the rumors are true.

The shortness of the chapters is very interesting, and I like that you pack a good amount of details in to every chapter. Overall, I really like this story and I can’t wait to see the progression of it!

Keep up the great writing! You’re doing great so far.
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I do really like this story. It's "brief" in some retrospect, and the chapters are not incredibly long, but you make small details go a long way. you're very descriptive and fluent when you write. your writing is beautiful.
keep up the good work!

The beginning really captures you. It really brings you in. It's powerful and gripping. I like how you describe KC instead of going, "This is KC and here's what he looks like." Really gives the story class, which is hard to find nowadays.

I also love the layout. It's simple and beautiful, with a picture at the top to focus and pull the entire story together. Great job.