Oh my God splendid! I love how you added the Black Cat to the mix. I'm not done reading it yet but I'm so siked to have found readable Avengers fics on Mibba. :]
If she ends up with Loki its either going to end her life, not last because he's thrown in prison, or she goes to jail herself for betraying humanity. There is no upside! x.x cc: <3
I'M ALL CAUGHT UP AND I HAVE SO MANY PHEELS I CAN'T EVEN. WHY YOU DO THIS TO ME FIRST THE SEXY LOKI SEX AND NOW THE STEVE PHEELS AND THE COULSON PHEELS AND THE THE LOKI PHEELS AGAIN WHY YOU DO THIS
So I noticed the other day that you had an Avengers story, and when I found it that Loki was going to be in it I had to check it out... and I love this! :)
I voted, BTW. I'm kind-of in love with Loki... so, quite naturally, I voted for him. (It would've been too funny if I would've voted for Steve). But, when it comes to Marvel, Steve just happens to be my favorite hero.
I think that she's in love with Steve and has a strong lust for Loki - though I can't say that I'm any different.
And remember that whole sexual tension thing we talked about? I had pretty much that entire conversation playing in the back of my mind while I was reading this, especially in Cat & Loki scenes.
what! no! not cool woman!!! seriously, just rip my heart out, crush it into a million pieces, run it over with a monster truck, and then ruin my life!!!!!
ow ow!!!! lol Stark gonna give Cap crap about that XD I really hope that her and cap can stay together after all this is through, that or if she could stay with loki that would be bomb too!
Oh snap, Loki is in custody. But that means Cap can see him and no one would judge because he could just say that he wanted to see what Loki was up to. But they really are going having date night, just with glass separating them.
With Loki's hold fading, her thoughts had drifted to Steve She so likes Steve. But ohhh she probably screwed that up since she spent the night with Loki. The boyfriends aren't going to be happy.
Cat wasn't aware that her hand had drifted up to her face and the index finger lightly traced her bottom lip. She could still feel his lips on her lips on every part of her body, driven by fire but cooled by the sweet chill of his breath. But she also totally likes Loki too, you can so tell. Poor girl, it just seems like she is so torn.
She had finally tasted that infamous silver tongue when it sought hers. AHAHAHAHA! Sorry... silver tongue, you know my comments
"I knew from the start you were capable of such manipulation, I'm just wondering why you don't use that thing on me. It would be a hell of a lot easier for you, and then you wouldn't have to try so hard to ignore my taunts." I also want to know why Loki just doesn't take her mind over? It would be a thousand times easier. But he totally loves her. He cannot deny it.
Cat kneaded her temple with her bare fingertips. "I think it's time I checked out the competition." She generally seems stressed about this. I love it! She and Cap should break him out LOL
This story is perfection. I can't with it. So perfect! All the dynamics are great! Your writing is a think of magnificence!
I really love this, it's one of the more interesting Avengers Loki fics I've read, I like that you've not mentioned much of the film in it, I don't like it when a fic is just a retelling of the film with the addition of a female character, occasionally saying something. And I'm quite looking forward to seeing how the next chapter pans out :3
I really love this, it's one of the more interesting Avengers Loki fics I've read, I like that you've not mentioned much of the film in it, I don't like it when a fic is just a retelling of the film with the addition of a female character, occasionally saying something. And I'm quite looking forward to seeing how the next chapter pans out :3
Soooo the entire time I was thinking about Cap and Loki going on some sort of hot date.
"No, he's developed true feelings for you," Loki turned to her with curiosity, observing her newly guarded body language, "and you for him." A faint trace of burning annoyance flashed across Loki's face and his eyes grew dark. I mean, that's why he is so angry over Cat having feelings. Loki loves Cap and will not tolerate the feelings of some girl.
Okay I can take so many quotes from your work and make Cap and Loki related jokes but I'm going to be serious for this comment. Or at least try to be serious. It's not going to work LOL
Loki did something quite unexpected, he reached up and placed the Sceptre on top of the bookshelf. He must really trust Felicia if he abandons his scepter. I mean that's his weapon man.. besides his tongue (no dirty comment from me I swear there won't be one) totally talking about his crafty words over here.
Can I highlight the entire last two paragraphs? Like seesh Loki, calm down. She's just a mortal lady but I guess there are none like her in ASS-gard. Yes I did just say that. Am I capable of making serious comments on this? I mean I know it's a serious story and I LOVE it so very much but I'm just an immature geek over here haha.
But wow Loki, you really are taking a liking to this Felicia. What is Cap going to think? Oh who cares, you get it on with the little blonde spitfire! She's your type.
I love this, you know that right? I can say it a thousand times but it will never change. The relationships you convey throughout this entire story are so utterly perfect and dynamic. It's perfect! And I get all excited when I can read this all the time. <3
Omg, that gif. I can't evennnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn. Uh so anyway, I love this! Loki is sweet, ugh I just love him so much it hurts! Can't wait for the next update! :D