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  • Maddi;

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    I love that you took the original story of Persephone and Hades and completely flipped it on its head. Instead of the story of her being kidnapped and taken to the underworld that we have heard so many times, you did the exact opposite and showed a more loving side of the relationship that they have. I love that Persephone actually had feelings for him and wants to be with him, even though her family doesn't approve of her feelings for him and forbids her from seeing him. I am a sucker for forbidden romance so that was my favorite part of this story!
    June 27th, 2013 at 11:02pm
  • avenmaide

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    Oh my gosh, this is amazing. I love mythology and I'm a hopeless romantic, so this story is perfect for me! :D Very well-written and heart-throbbing! I actually really like Hades in this story!
    January 25th, 2013 at 05:35am
  • MadamNixie

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    That was great:) I'm not usually one for romance novels, but I am a sucker for greek mythology and I loved this book! How you captured all the main details into only five chapters amazes me! I couldn't do that if my life depended on it! lol
    I would advise that when you expand it, that you add a bit more of a dark side to Hades and Show Persephone so she witnesses both the good and the bad of him and still love him... He is the ruler of the underworld after all lol. As for the mother, I suggest going into more detail about what happened between her and Zeus so us readers get the feel of where she's coming from. You have a briliant story here, and I really believe this would be a book I would find at the library with a bit more detail you are golden! I am definitly looking forward to reading your progress with this book:) Do we get to hear about Ares hitting on her?XD
    September 7th, 2012 at 06:06pm
  • which-witch

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    GAH. MY HEART IS BURSTING WITH SO MUCH LOVE FOR THIS STORY. I'm a fan of Greek mythology. And when I saw this, I had a little sqee-fest and then settled down to read this. It's awesome.
    September 3rd, 2012 at 06:30pm
  • Thorn-the-rose

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    I love this, please update or write a sequel or something, you write so fluidly and beautifully, it would be a shame to let a story like this just go to waste.
    June 3rd, 2012 at 12:54pm
  • xxkilljoypresentsxx

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    after June!
    :O
    why!???
    DD':
    Oh well, I loved the first five chapters! I know you can't update soon.
    But i'll forever be subscribed for this^.^
    Because I love this story!
    May 19th, 2012 at 04:54am
  • indigo.

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    I know you recommended Fighting For Freedom but I found this much more interesting. I've always been intrigued by the story of Perspehone and Hades and I like the twist you've added to the actual myth. Of course, the layout fits perfectly, but I've always imagined Perspheno to have darker brown hair, and shimmering green or really striking blue eyes. But yeah. This was a nice read. (=
    May 11th, 2012 at 01:52pm
  • Mew Aqua

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    i loved it!
    May 10th, 2012 at 03:03pm
  • CaesarSalad

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    As was expected she'd do ANYTHING to keep her daughter away from gods and forever alone, even if it meant imprisoning her. That woman is truly psychotic.

    I like how it worked out and you were able to explain in your own way how the story of Hades and Persephone happened. I really did enjoy this a lot. =D
    May 8th, 2012 at 07:28am
  • raja sahara

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    Hades and Persephone–my favorite myth.
    I must say I was skeptical because of the fact that you made Persephone be in love with him and go willingly to the Underworld with him, but it worked out rather well. It was kinda cute and romantic and made me like Hades haha.

    Demeter is one scary bitch, though.

    Anyways, this was good! I can't remember any major mistakes, grammatically, and plotwise, it was well spaced out and a different take to the myth itself.

    Thank you for entering and good luck! :)
    May 8th, 2012 at 12:48am
  • IrishSprings

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    I always loved this story! doing awesome so far hope to read more soon :)
    May 7th, 2012 at 07:02pm
  • CaesarSalad

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    I do love greek mythology. And her mother is right, gods don't give a damn about anyone but themselves. Same for goddesses though. Anyways, I can't wait to read the last two chapters. I really am enjoying the concept and how well this was written, as well as the layout. Very nice color scheme and picture. More soon? Yes?
    May 7th, 2012 at 05:02am
  • f4lcon

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    I love this! I am obsessed with the gods and goddesses, and I've tried to write a story like this, but this.. this is amazing! I can't wait for you ton continue with it :)
    May 7th, 2012 at 12:13am
  • powerofkisses

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    I'm really excited that you gonna continue this story :)
    May 6th, 2012 at 09:45pm
  • xxkilljoypresentsxx

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    love this story^.^
    Please make it more longer!
    I love it,Love it,Love it!
    Update soon!
    May 6th, 2012 at 07:04am
  • FluffeeWrites

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    Please make it longer than five chapters. I really got to like this story! Update soon! :)
    May 6th, 2012 at 06:26am
  • LonelyProcrastinator

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    this is great :)
    May 6th, 2012 at 03:33am
  • Zombiesloveme

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    Omg this is amazing! I am even more surprised to find just one comment! :O This is like so beautiful I had never heard of the story until I read yours :) Keep it up I look forward to the next one I also wish this would go on but I'm glad to know it's only five cause it's closer to the end and I'm desperate to know what happens!
    May 6th, 2012 at 01:42am
  • discodiva90

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    always been mystified by the gods and all...I love your version..and your writing..now i hv a new version to all i read and watched..
    oh i think you should change this to faanfiction hun!upload soon..like tomorrow maybe or now even hehe

    ps;pls check out mine if u will
    May 4th, 2012 at 09:57pm