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  • harmony_ann

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    Hello to everyone of you lovely people that has commented and read this story. I am the author of Alex's point of view, and I have finally come back to read one of my most enjoyable stories. I lost the information for the account this was written on, so I made a new one. Most of my opinions that were voiced on my old account have changed, and my writing style has changed as well. I never wrote more on my account because I was in a rehabilitation center for five months, recovering from a severe addiction to self injury. I haven't spoken to my co-author, Taylor, in quite some time. The Internet was one of the many privileges that I lost. I have taken it upon myself to rewrite "If You Dare", but only with the permission of those who loved it as well. Yes, it has been a year and we have all changed, but I think I could make it even better. If only I could find a way to speak to Taylor.
    April 16th, 2014 at 05:09am
  • BrittanyMorgan

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    This was amazing.. so sad and true, I felt all of the pain like it was my own. I'm glad there was no fantasy ending, it ended like it would have in real life. No fairy tales. I recommended. Maybe you'll get more readers even if it's been a year. Wonderful writer.
    December 2nd, 2013 at 01:01pm
  • AngelOfMisery

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    OMG! Can't stop reading. I love it.
    December 29th, 2012 at 03:41am
  • Of_Mice_And_Jayy

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    Great Story guys! Very Happy
    October 7th, 2012 at 10:42am
  • noregretseverxxx

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    I like this story it's abit confusing at some parts but i like it however your "death" part in the last chapter is slightly off as it can take around a couple of hours or even longer for someones life too go and not just a couple of minutes so if she does die that would be sort of incorrect but then again that's my opinion so yeah haha
    October 3rd, 2012 at 11:18pm
  • Sims3_109

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    from chapter 15 an onward I have just been confused out of shit. Sorry. I like the "Le gasp" at the end though x)
    September 25th, 2012 at 10:08am
  • Itsyoursin

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    @ Zaffhi
    Steven is Mason's older brother who had left him and Ella when he had turned eighteen.leaving Mason to watch over Ella and suffer with his parents. Lex isnt with Mason(sadly) she's with Steven whom had left along with Lex's family at the time(If im not mistaken) She just got back together with him, and Mason was heartbroken when he found out.....etc etc.....and Scar's just a random girl I threw in there to stir up more drama and yes and no, Mason was basically a comfort for Lex at the time
    Sorry for the confusion!Harmony might have a different view on this......
    August 29th, 2012 at 10:06am
  • Zaffhi

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    I'm kind of lost on the plot... I mean, Mason and Lex were together right? Who is steven? o.e""
    August 29th, 2012 at 09:56am
  • Eat the Rude.

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    I love this, but the font you've chosen makes it very hard to read.

    Sorry if this causes you any inconvenience.
    Keep going. ^.^
    August 26th, 2012 at 11:45am
  • Muffin123

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    Shocked
    June 27th, 2012 at 06:33pm
  • Muffin123

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    Grrrrrrrrr write more!!!!! ^.^
    June 27th, 2012 at 06:33pm
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    aww :)
    June 27th, 2012 at 07:43am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    :)
    June 26th, 2012 at 04:45am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    AMAZING! can't wait for another update.... I WILL RUN DOWN THE STREET NAKED IF I DON'T GET ANOTHER UPDATE SOON!!!! (no one needs to see that......)
    May 29th, 2012 at 06:57am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    AMAZING! can't wait for another update.... I WILL RUN DOWN THE STREET NAKED IF I DON'T GET ANOTHER UPDATE SOON!!!! (no one needs to see that......)
    May 29th, 2012 at 06:57am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    Subscribed. WHAT???? I MEAN WHAT? HER DAD!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON OR I'LL HAVE TO EAT A SHOE!!!!!! (I don't even know) JUST UPDATE!!!! Mad
    May 28th, 2012 at 07:50am
  • singer_girl

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    I am absolutely loving this!
    May 28th, 2012 at 07:15am
  • RavenclawRaves

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    I love it! Keep writing!
    May 6th, 2012 at 06:17pm
  • Madness_Lovelies

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    Really good, hope you keep writing!
    May 6th, 2012 at 10:37am
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