Make You Mine - Comments

it's occurring to me that I might never have commented on this...but I actually reread this periodically just because I love the Aimee/Zayn moments so much.

Loved it!!

so cute! Niall need's more love! :)

Very cute!!

this was so cute. and i loved the authors note when you brought in toews and kane..... it kinda made my day.

This was super cute!

I know I've already expressed my gratitude and undying amusement at you writing this for me, but I need to say it again. Thank you so much and also, what the hell is wrong with us? I wish we had been able to save everything either of us wrote for each other, because I know there are tons we forgot about! And now it's these fools. Gah.

How come the two of us didn't actually go in the hair and makeup direction? Pretty sure we wasted our time in college. I mean, seriously, we could have tag teamed that shit. Ah only in fiction can I have my dream job!

And I know you mentioned the accidental Larry Stylinson to me before, but can I just say that this Harry rolled his eyes, sharing a ‘is she for real?’ look with Louis behind her back before checking his watch. killed me? I imagine after the 'is she for real' look, it became a soulful and loving gaze. I'm just going to reiterate all the times you inserted some Larry "accidentally." Harry interjected, mouthing the word Americans to Louis whilst shaking his head.

FILIPINO TIME. That is all.

Also. WONKY.

she found herself intercepted and lifted off the ground in a guy’s embrace. “Thank God you’re finally here!” He said, twirling her around in the air. Alyssa held on for dear life to this guy, but shot Aimee a confused look every time he spun her in her direction. LOUIS. I can just imagine my face, oh my god. You should write a comedy show.

“We’re not wild animals or anything Aimee, jeez,” Harry remarked. LIES.

“You need a boyfriend,” Alyssa commented, shaking her head and leaning against the counter across from Aimee. “I agree,” Zayn announced, coming into the kitchen and slinging his arm around Aimee’s shoulders. She looked over at him, perplexed as he wiggled his eyebrows at her. “What do you say, sweetheart?” Aimee/Zayn is my OTP.

I love that Harry got shirtless. The dude does love to be naked a lot. It's only fitting. Plus, eye candy for this boyfran. I love the tiny little lines about you not being with any of them. “Wrong and wrong,” Liam said. and “Yeah, not for lack of trying by any of us though,” Harry interjected. Like, so effing casual about it. Like, yeah, we try to sleep with her. LMAO.

Zayn and Louis were sleeping, propped up against one another. No no no no no. LARRY.

They won't fucking leave. I can't. “I am not! I just want to hang out with my best friend, alright?” At their over-dramatically shocked faces, Aimee amended her statement. “My best female friend.” You're killing me. Of course Liam took over the leadership role and ASSIGNED everyone tasks. Precious bb. Oooh, going to Zayn's place. Yeah buddy.

I know you told me about this already but HNNNNG. “Take your time, sweetheart,” Zayn moved toward her, motioning for her to follow him. “I’ll show you to a guest room so you can have some privacy.” Lyss thanked him and answered her phone, waving to Zayn as he was closing the door to give her solitude. Niall fancies me, says Harry. Cue me giggling. EVEN THOUGH I READ THAT PART ALREADY. You did fail to mention this part omg. "And now, you have me. And the other guys. We’ll take care of you.” Kill. Me. Now.

Oh god, I cried on him. EMBARRASSING. But hey, it got me a hug and hand holding out of it. Of course Harry noticed it. He's like a fucking radar for feelings and sexual tension. We fell asleep holding hands. Oh god that's adorable. What the fuck are you doing to me? LIAM WAKING ME UP AND GETTING ME TO BED. Dead.

Is it sad that this Alyssa shook Niall awake herself, and watched the confusion as to where he was settle on his face before the memories flooded back to him. “Hi,” he yawned, stretching. made me think of him as like, a cat? and fuck Louis. Just leave him there, Liam says. OKAY. Hahaha. You made it into Zayn's room, eh? (;

NIALL'S MY ROCK.

The boys began to whine about them leaving, but once Aimee said they were more than welcome to help them, the boys all suddenly had other things to do. They just fucking refuse to be adults, don't they?

"he’s kind of shy, and is hugely insecure. I feel bad for the kid. He feels like he’s the least liked member of the group, and unfortunately there have been some ‘fans’ that have agreed. The other guys get really protective of him, but sometimes I worry that it’s not enough.” BB Niall, I love you oh my god.

“…You haven’t gone past making out?” “I ramble for ten minutes and that’s all you took from that?” Aimee exclaimed, baffled. “Yeah yeah keep it on the down-low blah blah blah….have you even seen him naked?” MOST ACCURATE DESCRIPTION OF OUR FRIENDSHIP. EVER.

“Hi,” he responded, a little breathless himself. His reasons were completely different, however, and had to do with a certain brunette in a sundress in front of him. “Ready to go?” Oi vey. Is it hot in here? It's getting hot in here. (..so take off all your clothes.)

“I don’t have the nerve I guess. Harry says to just flat out tell her, Zayn says to jump her…I just don’t know how to go about anything.” ZAYN SAYS TO JUMP HER. LAWWWWD.

Louis and Niall are singing. Oh my god they're singing.

THEY ARE OUT THERE AND THEY ARE COMIMG FOR YOU. I hate you so much right now. (My BAAACK.)

This was like the most perfect thing ever, and I can't stop grinning like a fool. My comment is probably ridiculous and I basically pasted the entire story in here, but FUCK IT. Thank you so much bestay. <3