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  • Matt Sanders;

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    WEll damn!! Matt is Kyle's brother and now we know more about Zacky and now I can see why he would be brought up more in the story! I really can't wait to read what your brain cooks up!! I'm so glad that this is being updated!! :)!! More sooN!!
    February 14th, 2014 at 06:22pm
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    February 14th, 2014 at 06:53am
  • Matt Sanders;

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    So I didn't read the update before this one, so I had to catch up a bit as I have been busy! Oh my gosh I can't believe that Gerard had sold him out and made him stay! I'm glad Frank tried to help him, I mean I relaly can't believe it, you know?? I don't know if I feel for Mikey or Brendon anymore honestly! Mikey shouldn't have came there in the first place adn Is ee Zacky came up so much last time and I wonder more about him and I think he is trying to get away from the gang life or something but he probably was a part of it and YAY!! Matt came into the story, mmm!! I can't wait to read more!!
    February 12th, 2014 at 05:39pm
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    February 9th, 2014 at 09:34am
  • lizzicleromance

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    I'm so happy you are updating this regularly. <3 Things are getting crazy... I'm a little afraid for what is going to happen next but excited nonetheless!
    February 9th, 2014 at 07:22am
  • BittersweetRevenge

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    Dammit Mikey.. you should have left before... now you're stuck.
    January 27th, 2014 at 10:51pm
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    January 27th, 2014 at 03:36am
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    Awww yisss
    November 29th, 2013 at 08:06am
  • Matt Sanders;

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    Oh I think that Zacky may have some demons and I can't wait to see what your brain cooks up and I want to see both Panic! And Avenged again!! Oh my gosh!! Ahahah and well here goes

    Dear Mikey,

    You really should have learned your lesson and I hope that Ryan has scared you. I could tell that you were thinking that you were going to die, and I understand that. Maybe it is what you need.

    I wonder how well you know Zacky and everything about him. Hmmm, I am no intrigued.

    That is all for now,
    Stephanie
    November 26th, 2013 at 10:29pm
  • lizzicleromance

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    I'm so happy you updated!!! This was the chapter I've been waiting for, the confrontation between Ryan and Mikey... oh, Brendon. Are you really a whore collecting play things like Ryan says? i can't wait to see where your grand master plan takes this story next :)
    November 26th, 2013 at 09:36pm
  • Your Soul Is My High

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    If you ever got this published it would be by far one of my favourite books. It's simply amazing how you have established this story. You make me fall in love with every post.
    November 2nd, 2013 at 01:49am
  • Matt Sanders;

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    Dear Mikey,

    How could you do that to Zacky?? He loves you and Brendon just wants you because you're not Ryan at all. I don't really understand you. I know love makes you do stupid and crazy things, but you know he doesn't love you!

    I just don't think you two are going to be together and you should move on. He married Ryan because you were with someone and he didn't know how to be alone. He just seems like he needs someone to make him happy. I don't know but I don't think you and him belong together.

    Love,
    Me

    Dear Brendon,

    You are an asshole!! Yes you are!! why are you doing this when you're married/ I get it you think you are in love with him.

    It's like the song This is Gospel if you love him let him go!! I mean it'[s how it has to be!! You're hurting Mikey and he doesn't deserve that. He may have decided to come to you but that still doesn't mean anything!

    Love,
    Me

    I really loved the update and can't believe that he went back to him and it really sucks!! I don't think Zacky deserves that!! I love this story and I can't wait to read more!!
    October 31st, 2013 at 04:55pm
  • stallion duck.

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    Shit, Mikey. Why did you? I don't think i would be torn. I'd be running for Zacky.
    October 31st, 2013 at 02:27pm
  • Chairman Meow

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    I'm all better now, thank you. ^_^

    MIKEY!! Why did you do that? Why? Oh my GOD! And Brendon, how can you still bring yourself to go to Mikey and mess with his head even though you know what he and Zacky have is amazing. You are cruel, Brendon. More cruel than Ryan even. At least Ryan didn't go around fucking with people's head and feelings like that. What happened to the sweet Brendon? Why Mikey can't see that Brendon just needs him when he can't have Ryan. Brendon is using him. And now he's trying to tear apart Zacky and Mikey.

    I just can't... Sad Sad Sad Sad

    Poor Zacky. Seriously, Mikey. Even the fucked up Brendon can see that you love your boyfriend. And why can't you see that yourself? What you have on Brendon isn't love anymore. Well, it's still love. But I don't think it's the same feeling you had all those years ago. You're just not willing to let go. Mikey, you need to learn to let go. Let Brendon go. Kick him out of your life for good before it's too late. Zacky doesn't deserve to be hurt like this. And Mikey, it's time for you to truly be happy without having to look back in the past. Brendon, I think you need to go and find help somewhere. As for Ryan, I can't wait to see what he's capable of doing now.

    All in all, this is a great and amazing update as usual! Cool Cool
    October 31st, 2013 at 01:58pm
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    October 31st, 2013 at 11:45am
  • lizzicleromance

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    Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Frankie. Just, I cannot get enough of Frankie and Gerard, even though there was no actual Frerard in this chapter, the mention from Frank to how much he loves Gerard.... it made my day so good. YAY for F&G!!!

    And oh, Mikey. I love this so much because Mikey is finally getting the recognition he deserves and you write him so well. He has come such a long way from when we were first introduced to him, that little confused Mormon boy who called Gerard a fag for dressing in Brendon's clothes... to meeting up in roach motels with Brendon. I LOVE EVERY SECOND OF IT. The roach motel setting of course reminds me of "Build God, Then We'll Talk" - did you do that on purpose? Super clever if so!!!!

    *sigh*

    I know that Zacky deserves to hear from Mikey... but he deserves to know the truth, that he's lost yet another boyfriend to Ryan's gang. No matter how much Zacky saved him when Brendon broke him, the truth is, you can't ever deny your true feelings. That's what has Mikey away from him now, his undeniable urge to be with Brendon and just be near him...even before he did cheat on Zacky he was already emotionally cheating so... yeah, he has a lot to think about. Regardless, staying with someone when you're thinking of someone else is never a good thing. Being with Brendon feels right, and it's so DANGEROUS and PERFECT and ahhhh!! I'm so happy that you updated. And thanks so much for your reply!!! :)))) PUBLISHED, DID YOU SAY PUBLISHED!? Your writing is phenomenal, GOOD LUCK!!!!!! <3
    October 28th, 2013 at 07:22pm
  • Chairman Meow

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    Mikey, you are giving me a headache. (but that's probably due to me having a flu right now but that's not the point)

    Do you really need to ask that question? I mean... really? Do you seriously think that you need someone like Brendon in your life? He hurt you for years. He used you. He's a selfish jerk and you're turning into a selfish jerk too. Go to Zacky, please. I just can't... I can't bear to see (or in this case, read) Zacky getting hurt. He's such a sweetheart. He's there to pick up the broken pieces you were when Brendon left you. He was there to fix you. He truly loves you and he wants to be with you.

    Brendon is just... he needs to get away from Ryan, seriously. Being with Ryan is messing with his head and now he's gone... I don't know. He just doesn't have a clue anymore. I understand that Brendon wants to be happy and somehow even though he loves Ryan, but being with Ryan is tough. Especially now Ryan has surpassed his father. He must be crazy strong and scarier than before. I can't imagine what he would do to Brendon if he decides to leave. It can't be pretty.

    Anyways, I'm happy that you updated! ^_^
    October 26th, 2013 at 01:34pm
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    Please don't let Mikey choose Brendon
    October 26th, 2013 at 11:32am
  • Matt Sanders;

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    I know it isn't a story without hurt and it would be like life and that is how I feel about this!! i missed this story so much and you don't know how how happy I am that it's back!! I love how you put feelings into it and how you actually write it!!!

    Dear Mikey (yes I am writing to him),

    I know you may think you love Brendon but personally I think he is using you to escape his life. He may say he wants that escape but he will never leave Ryan; yeah it might be because he is scared of him and what would happen but it isn't worth it. Zacky loves you and that is what you need.

    I think you just need to forget about Brendon but it's hard when you are in love for the first time. They say your first love is never forgotten, but Brendon isn't worth it. He's not. If he really, and truly, loved you he would be with you right now. No matter the costs.

    Love conquers all, don't you think??

    So you have a decision and I'm changing sides, I choose Zacky and I think you should too.

    Love,
    Stephanie

    I think Mikey needs to get his head on straight and let the past go. There is no good with living in the past when all it does is cause pain. He had found someone that really loves him. He probably just thinks he loves Brendon, honestly.

    Anyways this is a great story and you are a great break from all the mundane writers! I can't wait to read more!! Amazing piece of work!!
    October 26th, 2013 at 04:06am
  • stallion duck.

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    I'd stay the fuck away from Brendon.
    October 26th, 2013 at 04:02am