How can you be a good for nothing whore?? Brendon is probably just using you because he can't get what he wants from poor old Ryan!! I swear you are hurting Zacky and he was so caring and kind to you!! He was there for you and what happened?? Brendon left and made you believe he was dead; even if it were under Ryan's instructions!! I can't believe you'd cheat on someone!! Well I can *cough* Alicia *cough*! Anyways yes I want you to continue this story!! I want to see more and to see what happens!!
I just hate how someone has to be hurt no matter what way it pans out but it's like life. God you have a great imagination and you know how to get reactions out of people!!
I hope you read my comment on Sinners first, because I just wrote a comment describing how much I loved the original and how I'm so excited you wrote a sequel!!! GERARD'S LITTLE GIRL IS NAMED FRANCIS. I MEAN. CAN WE ALL JUST PAUSE FOR A MOMENT AND APPRECIATE YOUR BRILLIANCE, PLEASE? THAT, IS JUST THE SWEETEST THING IN THE HISTORY OF THE WORLD. You amaze me, you really do. I knew that with Gerard's house being so grand, and with the little darling being NAMED AFTER FRANK, that Frank was still very much a part of his life. And that meant that Brendon and Ryan wouldn't be far behind...
I loved Gerard in the prequel. I kind of don't like how selfish he is, but... keeping Mikey in the dark, and even though Mikey is indeed his family, I completely understand that Gerard did it all to protect his own little family. I get it, I absolutely get it. And this actually makes me love Gerard even more.
Oh my. Zacky! He's such a wonderful character but I somehow knew that all of this would tie in together eventually. I knew this Kyle fellow that he dated had something to do with the mafia and such, and bam. You totally confirmed it and it is all so brilliantly crafted. I bet Zacky knows what is going on.
AND CAN WE PAUSE FOR A MOMENT AND APPRECIATE THE FACT THAT BRENDON AND MIKEY OF COURSE GOT IT ON IN THIS NEW UPDATE? YES. THANK YOU. This is an amazing series, and I'm so happy I've finally stumbled upon it. <3 Thank you, please update whenever you can!
I AM SO ANGRY RIGHT NOW!! Mikey, how dare you cheat on Zacky! And Brendon... you just... ugh!!! Right now, I feel like I just want to punch the both of them on the face. Yes, in the first instalment I really felt sorry for Mikey and Brendon, and Ryan too. But then Ryan kinda terrified me. And I felt sorry for Mikey for being stuck in the middle and kinda angry at Brendon for not being able to choose and just let Mikey go. But now I'm just... I'm so angry at both Mikey and Brendon. And no, Mikey. You are not allowed to play the victim with me. What's wrong with you, dude!
You have an amazing boyfriend and you fucking cheat on him! I don't care if he's your first love. And don't tell me you don't love Zacky because I know you do. And I know you're probably hurting too but... come on. You can't do this to Zacky. It's not fair. And now I feel bad because getting angry at Mikey because Brendon should just leave Mikey alone. Why all of this is happening, oh GOD! Just... please, Ryan, Brendon and whoever else in that gang, just leave Mikey and Zacky. They deserve to be happy.
Anyway, if it's not obvious from the intensity of this comment, I'm just telling you that I'm definitely still interested in this story. ^_^
Definitely still interested. This is one of the major stories I've read where I'm just dying to know what happens, and even think of different ways the story will continue, so yeah. Just a little bit interested aha.
To answer you a/n, yes, I do think that Mikey should give up on Brendon. It might seem cruel because they still care for each other, but as far as Mikey's situation with Zacky goes, I think that they're a much better pair than Mikey and Brendon ever were...
Ohhhh god.. You said we will like the next one so i am looking forward to it greatly, because i am not sure how much more i can stand! I love Zacky, and Brendon isnt tpp bad anymore but he is still a butthole and i just want ryan to get murdered.. that would be pretty cool.. Just saying(: Usually i love the bad character, if he is attractive and has some charisma, but he is filled with too much hate for me to even think about liking him. I love your writing. Thanks(;
No character has had me on a fence like Brendon has. I have no idea what to think of him. I really just wanna say he's a dick and go on rooting for Zacky and Mikey but that's not happening. I have no idea what to feel. Sorry, babe, it's not. I just checked for you. I guess it wasn't uploaded for streaming yet. But hey, when it does you'll be the first to know.
So Brendon wants to protect Mikey right...so he isnt really a douche, but wants to protect him from Ryan and the gang! What about Zacky Im still rooting of them together at the moment....or does Zacky have a dark twist??? I want to know!!! Love it all update soon :D
I'm sorry that I haven't commented in a while. I feel pretty slack because all I do is wait for you to update, read it and then I don't comment. I love the way this is going. I am still amazed at how well you develop your characters. It is just breath taking. I can't wait until the next part!
So he does want Mikey but he wants Mikey safe so he has to keep Mikey away from Ryan because "the dragons are painting the sky red." Does that mean Ryan and his gang are killing more people? And I really do like Zacky so please if anything don't make them break up.
I still stick to the no win situation theory. But now I don't know, I feel like at least Mikey now knows Brendon is the way he is now, because he wanted and still wants to protect Mikey. It's really really nice to see them written like this its so different. I mean, a lot of people write Mikey as being vulnerable, but this takes it to a new level because its something completely unexpected and on such a scale that even the most strong willed of people would be completely lost and alone. I really cannot wait for more of this story