I'm guessing that the Frank that came up in this chapter is Frankie's dad? And Frankie turns out to be a fertile? And Gerard discovers him? And they fall in love?
Aw no this chapter wasn't crap!! It was awesome! And swe got to see Mikey! Whoo! Dude I'd love to be your beta or whatever, I dig grammar. (I did not just say that...) but yeah. Message me or whatever it would be totally awesome :D
So um...I haven't even started reading your story yet and I'm in love with you already simply from the summary.xD YOU'RE HILARIOUS. Okay, I'm going to go and actually read the story now. :3