Early Stockholm - Comments

I noticed that other comments have mentioned the fact that this lacks detail. I love detail, but at the same time, it's great when the writing you are reading leaves you with enough room to imagine what is going on yourself. Sometimes simplicity from my point of view makes it all the more intense, particularly in the situation that Kirsten finds herself in.

Sorry I actually wrote a much bigger comment that that but for some reason only the first bit sent, now I can't remember all that I put how annoying. I really like this and I Am very interested to see where this goes. I'm interested to find out if she will ever try to escape if she gets the chance to or if she will decided to stay with Micky no matter what and to find out if they ever get caught without one of them getting hurt. I will definitely be subscribing to this so I can hopefully find all these things out

Sorry I actually wrote a much bigger comment that that but for some reason only the first bit sent, now I can't remember all that I put how annoying. I really like this and I Am very interested to see where this goes. I'm interested to find out if she will ever try to escape if she gets the chance to or if she will decided to stay with Micky no matter what and to find out if they ever get caught without one of them getting hurt. I will definitely be subscribing to this so I can hopefully find all these things out

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you should write more this is really good :)

I must say that this story is definitely interesting. Right from the first chapter, I knew that I was going to like it and I immediately clicked on the second chapter. You are a very good writer and I didn’t notice any spelling or grammar mistakes. I would like it if you used a little more detail though and described where she was, the condition of the hotel, the condition of her body. I think that it would give the story more depth. I am definitely going to subscribe and I can’t wait for your next update.

great story!!!!!!! update soon please!!!!!!

great story!!!!!!! update soon please!!!!!!

Wow, Great job so far! Keep it up :)

Interesting. :) Keep it up!

I really like this, keep it up c:

Loving it! Keep writing it! XD