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  • Penguins11

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    loved the new chapter! Glad to see you've updated!
    September 27th, 2014 at 08:25pm
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    Gah I miss this one I wish you'd update it sometime
    July 1st, 2013 at 01:18am
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    Sid's oblivious and I don't think he has anywhere near Max's charm with the ladies Wink
    July 19th, 2012 at 06:55pm
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    Yes, I grew up with them! There are a few themes and jokes hidden in the story, you just found the first one ;D
    July 2nd, 2012 at 02:28am
  • Ladyfiaran

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    Oh, Max is using his French charm on her, no woman can resist Wink And I just noticed all chapters are named after AC/DC songs, you like them too?
    July 1st, 2012 at 03:29pm
  • Ladyfiaran

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    Oooh, typical Max Mr. Green I had to LOL when Lori referred to him as Adonis, this is going to get interesting Mr. Green
    June 28th, 2012 at 04:04pm
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    Sorry guys for the lack of updates! I'm on vacation and actually had someone pass my second day here! I PROMISE to have multiple chapters out by the end of next week! Thanks for hanging in there with me! Mr. Green
    June 22nd, 2012 at 04:06am
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    update?
    June 20th, 2012 at 05:16pm
  • Penguins11

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    I'm really enjoying this story! I'd always wanted to do something like this but never really knew how... and you're doing a fantastic job of it!
    June 6th, 2012 at 09:58pm
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    oh no! Schenn's a bad guy?? Really liking this story so far!
    June 6th, 2012 at 09:33pm
  • Ladyfiaran

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    Whoa, I love the idea of Max being a spy and seeing Lori naked after her workout and how he's actually starting to like her :D This is really neat, I'm normally not into cop or crime stories, but this is really cool and I love how Max is already getting the hots for her. And the part with Geno and the cake was hilarious, I can totally imagine him doing that. Keep going :D
    May 14th, 2012 at 04:32pm
  • Ladyfiaran

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    Heather and Danny are so cute together, I like reading stories about Briere finding himself a girlfriend, his boys sound like a handful. This may sound weird, but I think the idea of Max spying on Lori is hot, I can totally imagine him as a spy or a bad guy, but an interesting, charismatic bad guy who the girls love ;) Can't wait to read more.
    May 10th, 2012 at 03:51pm
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    This is really good, I like the idea of the guys being cops or gangsters, I think Max would make a great gangster :D And good call on making Danny a DA and Coots his assistant, I can't imagine Briere as a bad guy at all. This sounds like it's going to be a cool story, can't wait to see where this one goes. And LOL at Sid being Robocop :D
    May 10th, 2012 at 04:14am
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