Blind Photographs - Comments

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First and foremost I want to say kudos for the completion of this story, I always feel like that such an accomplishment and hell you have a sequel so you have passion for this story that's for sure! I'm not big on reading FFs on bands but this one was well written, I hadn't realized at first that it was MCR. The layout is okay, but i guess all that matters is what you're reading! Keep up the good work!

Hey! I'm from Comment Swap. Actually, I found this story quite unique. I don't know too much about My Chemical Romance, but I could still enjoy. I must appreciate the layout, its very different and quite cute haha <3 Also, your characters are very well developed and your descriptions are fantastic as well. All in all, I felt this story has a lot of potential. And actually, congratulations on finishing it! Its an awesome work. :)

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First I don't know anything about My Chemical Romance, so this probably wasn't the best story for me to read. Second I think that this story shows a lot of hard work and commitment, which is great! I think that if the characters meant more to me that this would have been an amazing story, but once again I had no idea who they were, sorry :( You did however do an amazing job by going into such great detail with this story, so props for that! Keep on writing because it seems like something that you're really good at!
Love Katherine-Lynn <3

First off, I love the colours in the layout - very MCR! In a sense of content, the story is really good. Your plot is developed fantastically and the characters are also well established. I'm not a massive fan of My Chemical Romance or action packed stories but this was definitely interesting and engaging. I see that you have written a sequel and I anticipate that this is a good background for your future writing in this series! Very well done!

Hey! I don't make it a habit to read band fictions (found this via comment swap), but I'm a fan of My Chemical Romance. Not a totally nut job, but I do love their Black Parade album and have written a MCR fic back in the day. Haha.

Okay, so first off, I love your summary. Although the disclaimer could be smaller, but I'm not raising hell about it. Shit, you should see mine. Lol. Anyways, I just sort of blew through this. You have a nack for description and I found this to be an awesome story. It was a little hard to follow at times, but all in all I couldn't seem to stray from this.

Also, what made it difficult to stay with the words, was the bright colors of the layout. They had my eyes crossing while trying to read the chapters and I have to resort back to the default layout. Besides all that jibber jabber, I just want to say that this story holds great imagry and good job. :)

I came to this story via a comment swap and something I always key into is layouts, because I find them semi-important. I think the layout needs work, I'm not saying it's god-awful but I'm saying it just looks a little sloppy, maybe spend some time on it, like another 5-10 minutes it can really make a difference. :)

I like the title though I think it's interesting it drew me in very well, the summary was short but despite being so short I think it did a really good job of drawing me in again, I wish it was a little longer however and I wish the disclaimer was smaller, and looked different then the summary because it really confused me.

Okay so I'm going to mention this again, I found the layout extremely distracting while I was reading the first chapter, extremely, I had a hard time concentrating because of the bright colors so I had to read it a few times.

The first chapter is extremely hard to follow, just who is talking, what's going on, it's just a lot of information thrown at you in a short period of time, so maybe just go through the first chapter and revise it, just make things clearer because I found it hard to follow and judging by some of the comments I'm not the only one. Other then that I thought it was really well written, when I could follow the descriptions were great, the detail was awesome, the characters were real and fleshed out, just make things clearer is the only thing I can pick on. :)

Even though I admittedly only read just the Summary, this sounds like an amazing story. I'm not really familiar with "Danger Days: The True Lives Of The Fabulous Killjoys" album (seeing as I just used Spotify to look up the album name) so I can't make a definitive analysis on this story. From the Summary alone, it sounds very interesting and makes me wonder why she has to change her name all the time. And, what I read from Spencer Walter Reid on the comments, I laughed at the first part... even though I don't know which one of My Chemical Romance guys plays Jet; it sounds like something Frankie would say, but I can't be sure.

I hope your readers love the sequel, and good luck in the future of writing.

I have no clue why I'm still commenting on here, I guess I just really love this story. It's the total package. Action-packed, as well. For some odd reason, the color scheme and storyline reminds me of Batman, the superhero, and his movie, The Dark Knight. I know purple and green represents the Joker, so maybe that's why it reminds me of batman. Anyway, bravo. I really loved,this stry, and can read it over and over again, each time, giving me a different perspective.

Love the names, too!

This was a really good story. Confusing at times, but really good.

I agree with the person below me...I also came to this through a comment swap and had no idea what was going on. xD I do like those kinds of stories, though, where I am pushed into the middle without any explanation beforehand...but I think you should put a little backstory in the middle or something. Not the whole thing, just enough for someone to know what's going on without knowing the entire background of the fandom. I enjoyed it, though, and read the entire thing...it definitely sounds like an interesting concept for whatever fandom it is for. I'm sure it's very good. :) <3

I came to this story through comment swap, and I couldn't get through the first chapter, not because your writing skills are bad, because they're not, I just have no idea what's going on. And a second point, I've seen so many MCR stories today, and I'm not a fan, it's really just throwing me off. Your sense for detail is awesome though. But I think you should be more clear on what is going on.

I am so happy you wrote this, I've pretty much read every Killjoy fanfiction on here so this was a great surprise, I really like the storyline and I can't wait to start reading the sequel :) I am a massive fan of My Chemical Romance, and I'm proper happy that this includes the team, I was also proper pleased when you include the two Killjoys named Joker and Harley, Carry on writing and keep running!

Finally comment swap brings me to an MCR fanfic, and an excellent one! Your characters are well developed, you plot is interesting, and your grammar is almost flawless. I've only read the first three chapters, but I plan on finishing it. I love it! The only suggestion i have is that you change the layout. These colors don't go well together at all, and if you want them to clash boldly to fit the killjoy theme, you should pick brighter colors.

Comment Swap here! I don't usually read Killjoy stories but this one is really well-written. You lay the scene out excellently and you make it so you don't really have to know a lot about where the story is coming from to understand what's going on. Keep up the good work!

Hey I'm here because of Comment Swap I think this is a really neat idea for a story, I think it's a really good story! Well done! The sequal looks good too! I'm definitely going to recommend this! I hope you keep up your writing.

Hey I'm here because of Comment Swap I think this is a really neat idea for a story, I think it's a really good story! Well done! The sequal looks good too!

Wow. This is incredibly well written. I'm from the comment swap, and although I'm not normally a reader of Killjoy stories, this is well, amazing. I love the amount of detail you put into it and I found it funny how they were contemplating poking the protagonist. Keep up the good work!

Yes! Finally another Killjoy story for the comment swap!
Okay, so far I've only read the first chapter. Here's some of my favorite parts:

“You think it’s dead?”

“Maybe, Jet, poke it.”

“You poke it! If that thing’s alive, enemy or not it’s going to be pissed.”

I laughed so hard at this part. I loved some comedy in Killjoy stories, it lightens the mood when things are tense.

“Of course I’ve been out here.” Lie.
“I’m so tough, I could take on anything that stupid tower could throw at me.” Lie.
“I even got three dracs before I set up here.” Total utter and complete lies.

I think what I liked about this part is the fact that I'd probably do the exact same. I would lie and try to act all big and bad when I really wasn't.

“Ones who want to kill me outright, and ones, like you, who say you’re friends and then shoot a beam into my back.”

This was an awesome line and a great way to end the first chapter.

Great work!!!

I really like the summary... Like, it seriously made me want to read the story. Also, the title was a really good choice, because it described the story in a way I haven't seen many Mibba users do before. If you know what I mean. I only read the first chapter, and I really like it!!!