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  • books13

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    :( 4 years latter and your not done. Any chance for an update?
    October 1st, 2018 at 10:12am
  • ghjkghkj

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    Such a fantastic story! Update soon ((:
    August 1st, 2014 at 09:28am
  • X MCRMY X

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    Heyyyyy. I just got through reading this and I understand completely where you're coming from. YOu have your life outside of mibba to deal with, yet you don't want to let your readers down. Believe me iI know. This story is so damn amazing, and beautifully written. Im anxious to see if frank's plan really works! Anywhore..update as soon as you can and are able to because this story is really fucking good!!
    May 7th, 2014 at 07:23am
  • jackyvengeance21

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    OMFG This story is amazing. Please update soon.
    February 24th, 2014 at 06:04pm
  • Artax

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    I miss this story! Can't wait to figure out what happens next; hope you're still updating:)
    February 1st, 2014 at 02:59am
  • lizzicleromance

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    @ the blissfully dead
    I understand COMPLETELY with the dead ends. It's like, you WANT it to continue, you LOVE it. You're so proud of it and it DESERVES to be finished but... you're faced with, what comes next? How do I proceed? You may have a vision of the ending, but NO CLUE how to freaking get there. That's always my problem. If I don't have someone behind me pushing me to continue, I just stop. My co-written stories always flourish because it's literally written with them- every little thing that happens in MSYA, me and Court collaborate completely on the entire thing. She really is the Gerard character, I really am the Frank character, and it just WORKS. But like, I want to update Clavicle, I want to update EVERYTHING- but it's so hard to do because I need someone there to push me to doing so. I need the inspiration, I need a muse or else... it's a dead end and I have angry readers who are like "Geeze Lizzy, wtf? Five years and no update? Whore."

    Just kidding. But I imagine that's what they are thinking :3

    So def, if you ever need aaaaaaany help or inspiration, get at me! I live for plotting and writing Frerard, all day. <3
    October 27th, 2013 at 07:13pm
  • the blissfully dead

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    @ lizzicleromance
    Awww, thank you! This story is my biggest I suppose, but I just came to a dead end with it a few months ago. It's definitely going to get finished, but I just don't know when. I think I'll just be posting chapters whenever it feels right, even if it does take months!

    Thank you so much for your support!
    xo
    October 27th, 2013 at 11:07am
  • lizzicleromance

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    Werewolves and vampires and humans and fairy godmothers- OH MY!!!
    Oh, please continue writing. I'm amazed at how well you've set this up so far~ then again it IS written by you so I suppose I shouldn't be TOO shocked... PLEASE DON'T EVER GIVE UP WRITING THIS (says the girl who never updates any of her stories, ever). If you ever need help or inspiration, I'm always here to help!! :)
    October 26th, 2013 at 10:46pm
  • p.......

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    Ugh this is so beyond perfect i cant even
    September 30th, 2013 at 10:25pm
  • You'reJustASadSong

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    @ the blissfully dead
    Man omg It's totally cool, like, with a story as epic as this who wouldn't be excited? =D

    I'll try not to hate you c; But twists are great. I really cannot wait to see what you do with this story, because I'm pretty sure you'll turn it into somewhat of a masterpiece anyway.

    <3<3<3
    September 8th, 2013 at 01:55pm
  • the blissfully dead

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    @ You'reJustASadSong
    Holy fuck, thank you do much baby. Your comments make me so happy, I just love that you like this story so much!

    I'm so glad I finally updated this, it feels kind of like a relief for some reason. I was just randomly thinking about it decided to write an update. I'd already written the chapter months ago, but I was kind of like, oh screw that, that shit is old.

    I'm so glad you like, your comments are my favourite! ^.^

    Yeah, Mikey's an ass, but he's just trying to be a caring ass in his own fucked up way.

    But oh my god. Everyone is seriously going to hate me because there is such a huge twist in the story and ugh. The characters you think are the good ones aren't and it's like, woah it's a fucking shitstorm tornado going on here. Yeah. There are lots of surprises coming up!

    Thank you so much for commenting, your opinion matters to me the most! You're the fucking best, I mean it! C=

    <3<3<3
    September 8th, 2013 at 01:21am
  • Atomic Cyanide

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    I feel like abad person for wishing Mikey would just fucking die already!
    Whatever
    That was awesome!
    September 7th, 2013 at 05:37am
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    I love this so much <3 I really hope you can update again soon :)
    Please let Frankie find Gee in time and then they can be together :3
    September 7th, 2013 at 04:08am
  • You'reJustASadSong

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    Aw holy shit

    Ok I didn't have a mini heart attack when I saw this at the top of my subscription list or anything

    I'm so glad you don't even understand, oh my gOD IT'S PERFECT AND THERE ARE SO SO MANY WONDERFUL THINGS I COULD SAY BUT I REALLY DOUBT I COULD CRAM THEM ALL INTO ONE COMMENT AND IF I TRY IT'LL TAKE MY LIFE. OK. ALL I CAN SAY IS THAT I LOVE THIS, AND I GOD FUCKING LOVE YOU.

    Another cliffhanger, I don't know how many I can take but I just know that the next chapter will be fucking amazing as per usual. And Gerard. And Emily. And Frank. And Ray. An Mikey, too.

    Poor Mikes though, I mean, he is a huge asshole, (that doesn't even begin to describe him) but he cares about Frank, really. And himself. But Frank, too. But Gerard... ;-;

    I'm not even making sense anymore. But you get it, right? ='3

    There is absolutely no pressure for the next update, because trust me, I freaking know how hard these things can be sometimes. I mean, It's like a kid; You create it, you love it, it develops and becomes something more - but It's a pain in the ass sometimes. So this is just for a little motivation.

    I mean every single word I say, I can promise you that. And I'll say it again. I absolutely fucking adore this, and all of your other stories.

    I can't wait to see how this (and your others of course) turns out.

    =)

    <3<3<3
    September 7th, 2013 at 01:42am
  • p.......

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    Not trying to pressure you, or annoy you in anyway but please try and start updating again its been three months and i miss this ):
    July 13th, 2013 at 04:05am
  • Rebel_Killjoy

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    I know what your going through. But please update when you can.
    July 2nd, 2013 at 11:52pm
  • RayTorosArmy

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    I have read this like a bazzillion times, and it's just one of my favourite things ever. Really, truly stunning. My only wish is for it to continue <3
    June 3rd, 2013 at 08:45pm
  • Mcrkilljoyss12

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    PLEASE UPDATE PLEASEEEE JUST WRITE TWO MORE CHAPTERS AND END IT PLEASSSSEEE
    May 20th, 2013 at 12:39am
  • TormentingNightmare

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    Omfg.
    WHY THE HUGE CLIFFHANGER! OMFG
    THIS IS SO AMAZING!
    April 8th, 2013 at 02:19am
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    I love this story and would be willing to wait forever for it <3 take your time, and wait for inspiration to come to you :)
    April 6th, 2013 at 03:00am