i love this so so so so much, dan is so cute! this is perfect but it makes it so much better that my names Olivia too and its like its written about me ahaha. please update soon? its amazing :) <3
I think both of them are justified. I mean, Dan has had his heart broken too, & she should have at least a little trust & faith in him. Great chapter :D
This seems like a really good and original story! I like the story line and I can't wait to see where you're going to take it! It's got a lot of potential to be really good! Can't wait for more! :D <3