Just An Old Flame - Comments

Jonathan Toews? JOHNATHAN TOEWS? Holy mother fucking Christ I love him. Finally someone writing the fan fic for me! I love your style of writing very much. It isn't mediocre like so... so many I have read. When I read this, I feel like I'm reading out of a book. Any way, keep up the great work! This is too great!

GAH Jonathan Toews sexy time. yayyyy(:

This is well written!
You have a very good style of writing, and the layout is good.
I hope you continue this and you keep on going, because this story has good potential.
I'm glad the comment swap gave me this story too.

Love the spark they have between the two of them. Can't wait to see where it takes them.

They are so good together. Great update. Cant wait to read what happens next.

Oooh, Just what I needed to read while cooking breakfast

Looks like there will be another baby ;)

Fantastic update!

woah is she going to be preggers again??
then Jan can be a big brother

That was hot! Hmm, is there going to be another baby Tazer coming up?

Can't wait for next chapter!

Have these two not learned anything...I was glad to see them get together, but I am pretty sure that Mel will not be on the pill. Jon, you should have wrapped it up!!

Sorry I keep posting. I forgot it has to be 200 characters. :P

I like it. Mainly because of Jon but I like how it has another language and everything. It's great and keep up the good work. I enjoy Mel's character quite a lot and I'll be reading more!

I like it. Mainly because of Jon but I like how it has another language and everything. It's great and keep up the good work. I enjoy Mel's character quite a lot and I'll be reading more!

I like it. Mainly because Jon but I really like how it has another language and everything. It's just great and keep up the good work.

This is really good story if you want I can help you with Slovak language because I am from Slovakia :)

This is really good, I'm not really a Hawks fan but I love this story. I love how cute Tazer is with Jan and Melania, he would make a great dad. And Jan is the cutest boy, he looks just like his daddy But Kaner's being a little asshole, I hope he doesn't mess things up for them. Can't wait to read more.

Great update. I love that Jon and Mel are together. What is up with PK why does he not like Mel? Little Jan is cute; I like how you have him pronounce words. Great story; very interesting.

wow why is Pat acting so rude to mel
and why would he want to ruin their realtionship
something it up with him
but on the bright side Jon and Mel are doing good
I cant wait for the update

What is up with Pat? Is he mad because he lost his wing man? I hope they can work it out soon because i can see that causing some tension with Jon