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  • I Love T-Hallzy

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    So I just read this story in like 20 minutes! I couldn't stop reading!!! Such a great story!
    May 14th, 2012 at 07:26am
  • soupy

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    I am loving this story.
    Jon did take the chicken shit way out by texting Hoss - he should have been a man and met with him face to face and let Hossa know that he was serious (Captain Serious!) about his apology.

    And trying to get forgiveness for denying Janny, the flowers were only a start. Yes, they are nice, but melina needs to know that Jon will be there for Janny - that he is reliable and will not turn and hurt her son. Mel needs to know that Jon is willing to sacrifice himself for his son - just as she has done the past 4 years.

    But there is the added dimension of Jon's relationship with Melina - it seems like Jon wants the whole package - but he is going to have to redeem himself big time.
    May 14th, 2012 at 06:22am
  • babygurl94512

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    well at least he apologize to her but i think he should just talk to her brother to let him know he wasnts to be in Jan life and he is serious about it
    May 14th, 2012 at 01:59am
  • une.belle.fleur

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    I think she should stand her ground with Jon, he was a complete jerk to her for saying that!
    May 14th, 2012 at 12:53am
  • soupy

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    I was a little surprised that Jon let Patrick sway his thinking - he knew from the moment he saw Janny that he was his father. But he let Patrick plant seeds of doubt into his mind and as a result, he said some very hurtful things to Melania. That just doesnt seem like Jon.

    I am glad Hoss threatened Pat - the little jerk needed to be taken to task!

    But Coach Q is right - no matter what Jon has been going through, he has only been going through it for a few days. Melania has been dealing with things for 4 years! By herself!!

    So I hope Jon puts on his big boy pants and owns up to his responsibilities and treats Melania with respect.
    May 13th, 2012 at 09:35pm
  • bublbabie

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    I love this story and i can't wait to see what Marian does when he sees Jon again
    May 13th, 2012 at 05:24am
  • babygurl94512

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    well i hope her brother doesnt beat jon to a pulp
    they still need him for hockey lol
    i cant wait to read more
    May 13th, 2012 at 04:54am
  • ImaSpiderPirate

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    I love your updates so far, Leaves me to wonder what happens next :)
    May 12th, 2012 at 08:16pm
  • babygurl94512

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    Wow that was so mean what Jon said to her
    How can he think she wants something from him
    May 11th, 2012 at 07:18am
  • soupy

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    "Tank you"! Could Jan be any cuter!!?

    And I am not surprised that he was initially afraid of Jon - that serious stare is enough to scare anyone. But it looks like the bear may have melted the boy's heart.
    May 11th, 2012 at 02:00am
  • soupy

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    Oh wow - this is getting good. I wonder how little Jan will respond to meeting his father. It was good that Jon realized that the boy was a little intimidated at the initial meeting - that he reacted the way a shy 3 year old would.
    I look forward to a new update!
    May 10th, 2012 at 07:53pm
  • ImaSpiderPirate

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    Its a really good story, but can you fix the background? it makes it hard to read and i had to highlight the story just to do so. :)
    May 10th, 2012 at 04:47am
  • bublbabie

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    love it already. I can't wait to see where this goes
    May 10th, 2012 at 04:31am