I was definitely not expecting this based on the title and cover image, but I really liked it nonetheless. I will admit, I laughed a little when I saw the summary, but I liked the story content a lot and how you interpreted the lyrics into something very different than most people would. It was a creative use of the song.
The story content was a bit confusing the first time I read it and I had to go back and piece it together. So much is going on in one little paragraph and I applaud you for that. There's a lot of emotion packed in and I really enjoy that your male character is the one breaking down. I thought the way you applied the lyrics was quite clever actually. It makes this rather unique.
The story content was a bit confusing the first time I read it and I had to go back and piece it together. So much is going on in one little paragraph and I applaud you for that. There's a lot of emotion packed in and I really enjoy that your male character is the one breaking down. I thought the way you applied the lyrics was quite clever actually. It makes this rather unique.