He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not - Comments

First off, I have to say I love the simplicity of the layout and the one line summary – it was all it needed and made me intrigued to what was coming up. The connection of the Starbucks ‘fuck off’ sign and wanting Mile to go away was humorous in a serious sort of way, and I loved the way you incorporated that in there. Their dialogue definitely was interesting, and the ending was cute despite the fact she got fired. I liked her fiery attitude and Miles’ persistence, which was cute to read. The quote was also incorporated nicely, it was very fitting to the story which I thoroughly enjoyed.

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