This is good. I like this. It's mysterious and I think it's going to attract more people because of that. I definately like how energetic Casey is. You know I'll read the rest of this.
The first thing I noticed about this story is the sense of mystery and openendedness - and I absolutely adore that. The events in the first few chapters unfold very nicely, and I find myself rather drawn in. Keep up the good work, I'll definetely be reading the rest of this.