Oh my gosh, your way with language is beautiful. The allusions, the metaphors, the way you (almost) always brought the reader back to understanding in what setting we were - it's very very well done. Honestly, good job. Very descriptive and you mentioned in the end that this was your venture into prose writing. There's a heavy debate, age-old, between writing poetry and prose. I think the intense descriptions, the stunning imagery you used, made this piece lean a bit towards poetry for me but that is not a bad thing at all. You are a masterful writer and it was an enjoyable read. Definitely on my recommend list.
February 12th, 2017 at 11:10am