This is amazing! I especially loved the imagery and how you described the forest in the beginning. This is also a very original idea, though it reminds me a little of Enchanted in a way, with her coming from an enchanted world to our modern day world. This certainly looks like it'll be a good story.
One word of advice though, is to put breaks between when each character speaks, it makes it easier to tell who's talking when. I noticed you're not using any type of layout for your story. It's not needed of course, but for most of us here it makes reading more enjoyable for some reason. If you don't know how to make a layout, I could make one for you if you want.
Overall, I really like this idea and I honestly can't wait to read more. =)
One word of advice though, is to put breaks between when each character speaks, it makes it easier to tell who's talking when. I noticed you're not using any type of layout for your story. It's not needed of course, but for most of us here it makes reading more enjoyable for some reason. If you don't know how to make a layout, I could make one for you if you want.
Overall, I really like this idea and I honestly can't wait to read more. =)