Plz, plz don't make us wait for the next chapter. I gave a major exam in the next five hours and I just kept reading this thinking it wasn't going to end...till it did. Plz u have to update soon or I might...die.
Wonder what Louis will do when he finds out about Liam. Don't go off radar...plz.
Guys, just stop, okay? Please? This is too beautiful. I can't take it. Liam is just too innocent and broken and Louis is just too fucking selfish and Zayn only wants Liam to be happy.
I LOVE your writing styles. How Liam repeats important words and phrases, how Louis is so blunt. They really bring the characters to life. Does Zayn have his own point of view too? I hope so, that'd be interesting.
All I can say now is Louis BETTER NOT end up with Liam in the end. I swear. Ziam ALL THE WAY.
And please don't make us wait too long for another chapter :)
Wow. For one, the layout is absolutely perfect and this plot of yours that you're starting is so heartbreaking that I am actually shouting out loud for Louis not to be such an idiot. I think, from your first chapter, he's most likely going to end up breaking Liam and changing him. So yeah, I'm gonna subscribe and recommend 'cause it's just that perfect. Geez. I'm in love with this. Update soon?
ugh omg i just read it again because it was that amazing...im fangirling over here and i'm creeping myself out but seriously this is so beyond amazing, i'm in love.
This is AMAZING...like pure perfection! You have some serious talent for writing :) It really was written so beautifully! I love love it.
I NEVER read slash either! I usually click away immediately when I realize it's slash, but I just couldn't with this one! It is honestly too good to pass up! (: I'm so excited for it..especially because it is my first flash story! lol
Subscribed and Recommended :) can't wait for the next update!