Running Circles - Comments

This isn’t the usual type of story I would read but it is really good. I love the way you developed the characters and relationships with everyone. I hope you update as soon as you can. I’m looking forward to where you take this story. I’m sure you have big plans for it.

I say the biggest problem would be to work on the presentation of the story. Your whole story comes up in block text, which is very agitating to the eyes. I would suggest breaking dialogue up along with new ideas. It would make things easier to read.

I think it's a pretty good story, but it just needs to work on some mechanics and presentation.

I love this story so much! Can't wait for another update!! Hope you feel better! :)

Oh my god. THIS STORY. I love that Lee and Josh have a history, heaps of stories try to do this but it doesnt work. With your's it just does. I really like how sweet Josh is, and so far I love it.
Keep it up sweety, and I hope you get better soon. :D

Love!!