I've noticed that on multiple occasions, you've written "women" (plural) instead of "woman" (singular). There was another excess URL link, I think at the end of last chapter.
Now you've done it. I'm actually tearing up. In a public place *fans self* Lucius has always been one of my favorite characters, thoughout the story. He and Draco may even be higher on the list than George or Adara.
Halfway through twenty-eight- Oh my gooodness Draco is soo sweet *wails* I have to admit, I thought she'd just find George downstairs in a room, but that's apparently still possible.
I hope those nosy wizards have the sense to keep their mouths shut. It isn't at all classy to spread gossip. I look forward, at this point, to seeing more of Deveney, although it would be a shame if Adara lost Rachelle's friendship. There seems to be a foreshadowing of them drifting apart though.
Oh my! I'm mad for this story! Lol, i just had to. I'm loving the characters and the plot line, and Adara and George are absolutely appended. I can't wait to read the next, and your other story! Thank you, darling, for writing such a wonderful novel.
This story literally made me squeal like a little girl. It's brilliant! I started reading it late last night and now read all the chapters. I feel accomplished. :)
AHHH! Not the Fred sweater.. Omg. I'm officially dead. And you know, it might be a little too soon but I'm already shipped Drachelle. Yupp, I'm such a rude person. After this, I'm so writing a Fred fic.