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  • bublbabie

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    wow. harsh but deserved.
    June 23rd, 2012 at 02:15am
  • Drop_DeadM

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    By that I meant I loved this.
    June 23rd, 2012 at 01:54am
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    By that I meant I loved this.
    June 23rd, 2012 at 01:54am
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    4 for you Glen Coco, you go Glen Coco
    June 23rd, 2012 at 01:54am
  • ImNotThatGirl

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    YOU CANNOT JUST LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS.
    June 23rd, 2012 at 12:44am
  • JustThinking

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    I wonder if this verbal slap was enough to get him a little bit down from cloud nine and realize just who he is talking too.. I'm starting to wonder if he even remembers just how cruel he was to her or if he even remember who she is.. now that would be a slap in the face for her.. she might be all argh over him and bitchy, but that is just down righ horrid and insulting on a whole other level.. I still kind of want her to slap him.. just because.. yeah xD
    June 23rd, 2012 at 12:09am
  • temptation;

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    OH MY GOD. DAAAAAAMN
    I don't even know what else to say but DAMN
    I wonder how he's gonna feel about that..
    June 23rd, 2012 at 12:02am
  • JustThinking

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    She sriously thought she was homefree?? Lol, this is Paul and his charming ways.. plus it was a class full of girls.. even I can do that math xD anyways, I wonder how long it will take for her to snap and slap him already.. yeah I'm a bit violent, but at this point how much does it take to get the message through? ^^ Looking forward to even more Smile
    June 22nd, 2012 at 11:20pm
  • ImNotThatGirl

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    This is the best story ever.
    June 22nd, 2012 at 10:23pm
  • caitlinstarz

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    I'm really enjoying this story so far :-)
    June 22nd, 2012 at 09:33pm
  • JustThinking

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    I wonder just how far she will go to get the hell away from Paul or Paul away from herself. Also when Paul realises just how much work he has to do to even have a chance with her. Imprint or not.
    June 22nd, 2012 at 02:54pm
  • hachie

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    LOVING THIS! I can't wait to see how she will act when she goes to school the next day! What's more Paul is very affectionate toward her! I can't wait for the next update!
    June 22nd, 2012 at 06:53am
  • Bluecaty15

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    oh love it!! i can see maria giving him hell for what he did to her!! I would definitely not give in to him - no matter how hot he is - he broke up with her the day after she gave away for virginity to him!! only assholes do that! but update again soon!!
    June 22nd, 2012 at 01:45am
  • iFeel.Like.A.Monster

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    Haha Paul got himself a long way to go.
    June 21st, 2012 at 08:58pm
  • It'sJustMe

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    I agree, snippets of his perspective would be amazing! I love this chapter. You are doing an amazing job. :)
    June 21st, 2012 at 06:17pm
  • bublbabie

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    I think i would prefer just snippets of his pov. Great chapter. I would have done the same thing and walk away too
    June 21st, 2012 at 05:54pm
  • XxguttabitchxX

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    I love this story so much . I think you should have snipits on paul POV so we get a feel of what he's thinking .
    June 21st, 2012 at 05:12pm
  • Synyster Gates;

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    Loved it
    June 21st, 2012 at 03:59pm
  • JustThinking

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    This could be good. The writing style seems pretty good, the layout is readable, the characters development seems good so far and interaction between each other is believable. Hmm... I think that was all I had to say. Subscribing in hopes I'm right about this being good and waiting patiently for more. Oh and the Paul thing, snippets of Paul's pov is more used and gives a different view on the story. Plus if you write the story from Paul's pov as a sequel it's not a sure thing that a people will read it. But I don't know I haven't seen anyone actually using that method. :3
    June 21st, 2012 at 01:43pm
  • LoveOrDeath

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    I love this!:) plz update soon:D
    June 21st, 2012 at 08:06am
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