Content With Redundancy - Comments

I really like this story so far and can't wait for them to meet again. I hope you update soon because I can't wait for this story to progress.

I really like this story so far. When I got through the first chapter, like everyone else, I found it really interesting and I like it. I also enjoy how well you've written this story. Sometimes I come across stories that don't make sense or just is written well, which makes me confused and not want to read any more, but like I mentioned, yours is really good. Kept me interested! Please keep updating more! Looking forward to what happens next! Plus I really like this layout of yours! =)

The layout colour is nice and after reading the first chapter, it seems quite interesting and leaves the reader wanting to find out about this mysterious girl who is sick. I also liked the line "found some quirks, found some jerks." Because it has a nice ring to it :D

I am a big fan of All Time Low and was happy to see another Jack Barakat fanfiction because most All TIme Low fanfics are on Alex Gaskarth which is depressing a bit. Dont get me wrong, I love all my babies equally but I just wish the others would get more attention. AKA More fanfics. I like your theme by the way!

Keep Writing and Good Luck

This is well written, and the short paragraphs are great for people with short attention spans! I don't usually have a short attention span, but it's early in the morning. Despite that, I enjoyed it! Well done

Loved it and Yayay zack lol

I'm really liking the story so far

I love this already!<3