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  • kassipoola

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    Maybe... Michelle will decide she wants a kid of her own...

    And then further in the story Bri gets distracted with that and Audrey feels..... Ya know(; Just a thought:p I LOVE IT WIFEY hahaha Or is it mom now? I'm lost...
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    July 11th, 2012 at 08:18am
  • lttomz5aliy

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    O.O will this be like the movie The Game Plan with The Rock in it?!??!??!?!?
    i will fight you if it is. i want no deaths. at all.
    but great story so far. keep writing :D
    July 10th, 2012 at 05:43pm
  • Skarsgard

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    there was a familiar emergency family? emergency.

    i love papa gates. i'm so glad you went with that reaction. i LOVE mckenna's reaction.

    i think michelle will be indifferent and not know what exactly to think. or maybe she'll think brian is ready to have kids and blah blah blah.
    July 10th, 2012 at 01:29pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Gotta say I enjoyed it. But I do have to wonder about Audrey.

    I love Val in this story. lol. She's so awesome! And I hope Michelle is okay. I mean, she's initially going to be shocked, of course, but I hope she remembers that her issue is not with Audrey and doesn't treat her like crap. ^_^
    July 10th, 2012 at 09:53am
  • Marissa.Motionless

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    I hope Michelle isn't a bitch to her, there are WAY to many stories like that. Good chapter :)
    July 10th, 2012 at 05:48am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I love this! Update soon!
    July 9th, 2012 at 09:22am
  • Skarsgard

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    YAY :D

    Okay okay so...
    "Did you mom ever... find someone? your

    This little girl knew too much than she should this just sounds weird to me. Maybe take out "too much" and make it "more".

    You now your dad is gonna wanna know about this kind of sugar honey ice tea, Syn. know not now.

    I really liked this. I LOVE that she went into the pet store. That's my favorite place. And I loved the whole black woman part. Can't wait for the next chappy of course :)

    Thanks for the shoutout too haha.
    July 8th, 2012 at 01:57pm
  • kierstlovesyou

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    Love it !!!
    July 8th, 2012 at 12:16pm
  • pekigirl

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    aww so cuteeeeeeee :D I want more of this
    July 8th, 2012 at 11:01am
  • Madam Shadows;

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    So, I'm totally in love with this! <3 Update soon, pwease? ;3
    July 8th, 2012 at 05:26am
  • Skarsgard

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    "My turned nine in February," silly, you mean i.
    July 7th, 2012 at 06:24pm
  • Through-the-Night

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    I forgot to tell you that I love your layout! It's super pretty.
    And I love the detail about his nose ring. That made me laugh.
    June 23rd, 2012 at 04:41am
  • Skarsgard

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    Got a few mistakes and I'm too lazy to go point them out. Maybe later. This is a great chapter though! I love it. I love Audrey.
    June 22nd, 2012 at 03:41pm
  • kierstlovesyou

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    So cute. Love it <33
    June 22nd, 2012 at 11:31am
  • pekigirl

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    ahah omg this is way too cute! I'm loving it, really :D keep up with this story. So different from the others I've read
    June 22nd, 2012 at 11:23am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I love this so far! It's a great idea, and it's wonderfully written. Please keep it up! :-)
    June 22nd, 2012 at 09:12am
  • hachie

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    Ohhh she used the past tense on her mother! Meaning that she is keeping something from them because she was very eager to learn about her mother's past. Now it seems that Matt maybe upset because he had the tone when he spoke to Gates. Wow is Brian reallu considering on marrying Michelle'???? I know Aubrey will not like that woman! I can't wait for the next update!
    June 22nd, 2012 at 07:49am
  • hachie

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    OMG You should be getting more comments! This is amazing! I love it! Aubrey is intelligent for girl that's only twelve! With Brian freaking out that he finds out that he has a daughter, Aubrey is calm as hell! I can't wait for the next update!
    June 22nd, 2012 at 06:29am
  • Skarsgard

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    Audrey is really mature for her age. And I love Brian's reaction. He is so torn and it's perfect. I REALLY love Jimmy's reaction. It's what I would expect from him. I really want to know what they fought about. It had to have been something serious so... I also love how Jimmy interacts with her. He's very cautious.

    When Jimmy is asking Brian what he wants you say "fraternity" and you totally mean paternity.

    And I really like how she freaks out about getting on the motorcycle. It's very realistic.

    I thought I had cought a spelling mistake but I didn't copy it and I just reread it and didn't find it so...

    Great update! (And this is a long comment haha. Thanks for the shout out!)
    June 21st, 2012 at 03:20am
  • Through-the-Night

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    Oh I loved that. Of course he would take his (possible) ten year old daughter on his motorcycle.
    June 21st, 2012 at 02:35am