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  • delirium.

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    Wow. This is amazing. I'm literally speechless and can't think of what exactly to say. You told such a huge story in so few words.
    April 9th, 2013 at 05:49pm
  • november rain;

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    I liked this. I especially love how you gave the girl so much character in that first paragraph and how you made her so unique (and hipster, actually). I don't have much to say, so yeah. It was nice, though. And I like the layout, by the way; simple but classy.
    July 25th, 2012 at 07:48pm
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