Sincerely Yours - Comments

OMG this is such a cute story from what I read so far, have you ever watched the movie beaches by any chance? In that movie the chracters were bestfriends and most of their friendship consisted of letters they wrote back and forth to each other, and they had issues sometimes; conflict I mean and anywho they wrote to each other from the time they were little girls, to when they became women. I find this reminds me of it a bit and i think that is awesome. I think Raina is hiliarious, the theories she comes up for Alyssa not returning her letters, like her being dead in a ditch somewhere, that is too much. I love the fact that Raina has an active imagination, and that her mom is like well might as well laugh at it, because what else can she do? I think you rock as a writer, I absolutely adore all the details you put into this story, it painted clear images in my head of how Raina and her mom look like, great job, can't wait to read more.

What happened to Alyssa?! The summary hinted that something major went down, and now I need to know what it is!!! Great job, by the way. I like how the first chapter starts with a letter, because it's personal and special between the two girls. Also - the quote at the beginning of the summary is the most adorable way of referring to best friends that I have ever heard.

Hi, I'm returning your comment now!:) I didn't know which story to choose so I just went with picking randomly. I like the picture, it reminds me of my sister and I. Same hair colors and everything:) I ADORE Raina! She's awesome and I love reading from her point of view. Your writing is really good. I feel like you're really familiar with the characters already and it's really easy for you to write in their perspective. I hope that you continue with this story! Subscribing and recommending!

This is pretty well written, I adore how it starts out with "Dear Indian Warrior". So far so good from what I can tell, I hope you keep up with this one.

So far, I like it. I love how you can instantly see they're best friends just by the way she writes her letter. I love this and I can't wait to see what you do next! The layout is simple as well as the headline picture. Best friend story- pretty boss! Now update and keep up the great work! :D

I'm quite impressed. Letters and journal entries, to me, are things that I'm rarely impressed with reading in 'amateur' form. (Don't be offended by that word.) I really think you did a great job here.

The words flow naturally, but they're alive and very vibrant. They paint images and give us a little bit of both characters.

I think the summary shows the promise of the story. It'll be interesting.

Starting off with the layout. It's absolutely gorgeous. No words. The fact that you chose the intro to be a letter is very bold. Shows that the rest of the story will be just as good. I felt emotionally attached to the letter because it makes me think about how one of my old friends and I were once like. Great start. I wish you luck in the rest of the story. x