The Sexy Puppeteer Has Captured My Heart - Comments

@ xXLoveForEternityXx

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this. Oh you think there's no plot do you? Hehe. I bet you won't see what I do next in the story coming. Or at least you'll have forgotten about it. If you're still interested in it, keep on reading. Oh and is there a story of yours that you want me to read and comment on? I'll do it. :)

So I read through the chapters pretty quickly. I haven't watched Naruto in SUCH a long time, but I love Sasori. (I don't know what it is, but some anime characters are just so darn amazing that you can't help but think they're sexy!)

I think I would like more of a plotline to the story. I would have thought (based on the summary) that the main point of the story would be Sasori and Miyuki eventually getting together. Maybe give little hints and teasers along the way that Sasori likes Miyuki as well but the romance was immediate. In light of that point - the story had no plotline at all.

All in all, it was a good story. I'd like to see it develop into a deeper storyline. The introductions and mentions of well known characters is fun.

Keep it up!

Comment swap sent me here, but I'm not sure I'm going to be able to read this story and understand it because I have never watched Naruto or anything :c I'll still try to read it though :3 Please check out my story 24/7 c:

Comment swap sent me here, but I'm not sure I'm going to be able to read this story and understand it because I have never watched Naruto or anything :c I'll still try to read it though :3 Please check out my story 24/7 c:

I know you didn't ask for a comment but I wanna leave one :D

I already had read this story a few days ago and I loved it then as I love it now.

It's awsome!

BTW I love Naruto I'm a HUGE fan!!!

I've never heard anything about Naruto so I can't really give my opinion on it that way.

I can't really even read the first chapter because you don't have it split into paragraphs (something that would get your story reported when the story editors get activated, so you'll want to fix that definitely). Every time I new person speaks, it needs to be a new paragraph. Two or more people will never speak in the same paragraph.

That will make it much, much easier to read.

Woe, I didn't know there was and Naruto stories on here... Let alone Sasori stories on here. It was okay, I mean, I kind of grew out of Naruto and stuff, but this isn't a bad story at all. I hope you get more viewers and stuff like that.

-Greg.