First of all yay Karl gettin his job back, two Gena u r a horrible liar u just said nothing is goin on between u and Zacky since y'all broke up and here u r bugging Lynn about her and Zacky all they did was fuck and after they declare friendship he still came back to have sex with her while he was chillin with u which means tht ur pussy wasnt good enough at tht point in time but now tht u r together don't go flaunting him around in Lynn's face like he is a fucking slinky so back up and don't be threaten her sayin tht u r goin to tell Michelle about her and Brian's antics tht shit don't involve u and the only reason u kno is becuz Zacky was upset about her and Brian, and three Michelle u had word vomit and tht word vomit got u losing Brian as a boyfriend and honestly u should have listened to Val when she said don't get ur hopes up becuz he just takin u to take or to propose but don't assume well u didn't assume ur friend Gena assume sooo u should blame her for gettin ur hopes up amd what the hell is wrong with u saying tht Lynn should be just a tutor and not hang out with u guys she is human just like everyone else and u don't trust her becuz she is friends with Molly and is close with Brian and of course green monster Gena don't trust her becuz she did sleep with Zacky and she can get over tht quickly she is datin him now, and four Brian please tell me tht u r sticking to ur words by really dropping Michelle becuz I honestly don't think tht u r takin sides but I do understands where u r getting at becuz Michelle is overreacted, is being really rude about Lynn, and is also segregating Lynn out of the group becuz she is a tutor thts not right becuz it would be fucked up if everyone segregated u out the group Michelle for being a a high fashion store owner soo don't be like tht, soo Brian if u r goin to dump Michelle do it properly and try not to cause any tension between everyone else ok, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
damn if I was Lynn and Gena called me a slut I would have slapped her so hard her head would have done a complete 360, or at least told her she wasn't good enough in bed if Zacky kept coming back to get sex somewhere else
and ooh Michelle's verbal diarrohea probably just ended her relationship - if he had cold feet before, calling herself his wife probably just put the nail in the coffin
and ooh what's gonna happen now that the two of them are alone
Man so much is goin on with Lynn, there is Zacky and her having sex on the beach, literally, and Zacky being a complete and utter asswipe like seriously what the hell was all tht shit for dude y would u do tht and thn leave her outside and callin her unstable, u dont even kno what the hell u want either dude...thn there is her and Brian and Brian is such a sweetheart gettin Lynn from the beach and giving her a shower so tht she won't get sick while he is in her boxers but it's sad becuz he is still with Michelle...I just hope in the end tht Lynn gets to be with Brian becuz right now Zacky is an asshole who only uses her for sex and thts not cool, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
oh goddamn!! this story is getting intense, with everything between brian and her.. and then her & zacky... gena & michelle on the other end.. but whatta hell was up with zee in this last chapter? i kinda want to bitch-slap him now.. and brian... well.. hot-damn! i'd take a shower like that with him without a second thought..
Fuck my life woman! I just sat here reading for like 2 hours haha. you kept me hooked. Now i'll be honest every couple of days i trawl mibba for stories to hook me and entertain. YOU GOT ME. now keep me ;) update update update! Love you, love your writing, love your story!
I just found this story today and this is just freaking amazing!! I'm completely addicted to everything in it! The characters, the story line, Lynn's relationship with Zacky and Brian, and even Karl! That guy's amazingly awesome xD A part of me is wanting her to stay with Brian, but another part of me wants her to stay with Zacky. I have to admit that I got really pissed when he was making out with Gena >.< But this last part was just so sweet, and Zacky had to open that door! Argh, I can't wait to read what's happening next! Please, please, please update soon!
Ok first of all idk kno y Zacky is lookin at Brian and Lynn with a disgusted face when one ur only friends with Lynn, two u have Gena and three Lynn caught u making out with Gena at Matt's party a couple weeks ago sooo u have no right to be upset at Brian and Lynn....Brian what r u goin to do with urself if u like Lynn thn dump Michelle but don't go cheating behind Michelle's back if u want to be with Michelle becuz thts not cool and stop confusing Lynn like seriously ur drivin her insane and Lynn I'm sorry tht u r confused but lets just hope tht Zacky doesnt tell Michelle or Val or Matt becuz thn it's not goin to be pretty at all, cant wait to read more update as soon as u can :)