Nightmare Remembered - Comments

Once again, very, very nicely written story.
I think this one is my second favourite of yours, The Hospital being the first.
I have to agree with the others, though; the layout is a bit too bright, but it wasn't too bad.
I hope you know what a fantastic writer you are.

Oh my god. That was so... oh my god. It was so creepy and so well written. I didn't notice any grammar or spelling mistakes at all. Your description was perfect, and I was literally on the edge of my seat as I read this. The way you ended it was perfect. It was so abrupt and "OMGWUTISGOINGON". Perfect perfect perfect. Really excellent job. I agree that you should maybe change the layout, the red is really bright. Maybe make it black instead of red? I like the blood spatters in the background though. Great job, and good luck with the contest! :)

Well that was scary. I'd probably die if I had a nightmare like that xD

Anyways, that was really well written. It was nice and short and to the point, but it was still descriptive enough that I knew what was going on.

The ionly thing I would change is the layout. I had to switch to the default layout because the red and white together was so bright it felt like my eyes were melting for a minute there

Overall, well done and good luck with your contest!

So short, but so amazing. I was captured and held until the last sentence. I would say to continue on, but the way you left it was just perfect. So perfect that there's no need to continue on telling the story.
You use such great detail, my mind is blown.
However, one thing I would change is the layout color. Maybe make the really bright red darker. It kind of leaves me seeing the layout after I leave the story page, haha.
I loved this, though