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  • NJDevil23

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    Too bad i will never know how Matt and Jeff will communicate with each other durung final play off game.
    August 24th, 2012 at 02:06pm
  • Bismuth

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    So sad to see this end but it was four kick ass chapters :) You write this stuff so well, I love it!
    June 14th, 2012 at 07:13am
  • Emiliana

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    This excites me! I think he does too.
    June 13th, 2012 at 06:46am
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    @Emiliana - you might get a full-length, less dirty Richie story this summer. I think he deserves one.
    June 12th, 2012 at 11:10pm
  • Emiliana

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    That was quite the finale, just like the Stanley Cup Final. I could totally see Richie & Carts sharing girls in the past. This was a fun read, but I'd love for you to do a full length (less raunchy? haha) story featuring Richie. His hotness is definitely under appreciated, imo.
    June 12th, 2012 at 10:57pm
  • headintheclouds

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    Oh man that was amazing! Great work! I loved it!
    June 12th, 2012 at 09:19pm
  • julietfalls

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    @Hockey bliss - that's the Roxy I meant. I figure that bathrooms in that place have seen more than a few horrible things.
    June 12th, 2012 at 06:24pm
  • JDStanley

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    This was really good from beginning to end!!!!!! Loved the details and attention to experience she was going through!!!!
    June 12th, 2012 at 05:09pm
  • hockey bliss

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    End?! No! Jeff obviously wants to pursue her! I'd love to see that! And she didn't say 'I love you' back to Mike.
    This has so much potential for more delicious chapters!!!
    Also, what Roxy bathroom was Mike thinking of? The only one I know is the one in Vancouver which is a notorious hockey player/puck bunny hangout.
    This was great!
    June 12th, 2012 at 04:03pm
  • xoxabs88xox

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    oh wow...now all 4 at once ;)
    June 11th, 2012 at 11:19pm
  • Nevermorex3

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    Holy Jesus.... Yeah... Damn. I need a cold shower.
    June 8th, 2012 at 11:38pm
  • RocknRollBlondii

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    oh lord in heaven...you're good...update soon!
    June 6th, 2012 at 12:33pm
  • Bismuth

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    This girl sure is lucky :) Update soon please!
    June 6th, 2012 at 03:23am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    ...........! Yeah...so hot. I cant even put it into words...Jeff Carter...Mike Richards...Shocked More please!
    June 5th, 2012 at 07:50am
  • Dallas.

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    wow.
    June 5th, 2012 at 06:30am
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    OH MY GOD this is dirtier than anything I ever could have imagined but now that I've read it I think I'll be returning to it...Jeff fucking Carter. that beard alone gets me excited. this is so hot. and I love that Mike is always near her. DAMN!
    June 5th, 2012 at 06:23am
  • Emiliana

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    Dear Lord. I feel like I shouldn't be reading this but I CANNOT STOP.
    June 5th, 2012 at 05:57am
  • headintheclouds

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    damn! love it!! can't wait for more!
    June 5th, 2012 at 05:43am
  • xxxFlyersGirlxxx

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    DAMN, Girl! You have an amazing talent in writting and i'm so jealous! Amazing story you have going here and it's completly different from anything else i've read. I'm def looking forward to the next chapter and where you plan on taking this story! (:
    June 5th, 2012 at 05:07am
  • soupy

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    I am done!

    I just finished watching Mike and Jeff team up for that goal tonight and seeing Sidney looking yummy in the black button down shirt at the game - and then read this. Holy crap!!

    I am totally done!!
    June 5th, 2012 at 05:07am