Brought here by comment swap. The poem at the beginning really set the tone for this story, and you handled the constant switching of past and present very well. It was all too easy to see this from Julie's point of view and understand that after what happened to her, she can't stand water, because it very nearly killed her. Not only that, but she passed out on the verge of drowning, with only the murky green water in sight. That would traumatize me for years as well. This is a very emotional story, and you wrote it well!
May 10th, 2018 at 03:38am