But It's Better If You Do - Comments

  • mosher123

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    I hope you update really soon.
    November 4th, 2012 at 04:29am
  • Synful Cocktail

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    Awwh, update soon?
    September 26th, 2012 at 06:59am
  • mosher123

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    yeah you updated... I hope you can update soon.
    September 6th, 2012 at 12:40am
  • mosher123

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    I really liked this, there's not a ot of Brendan Urie storys. There all about him getting with Ryan, so it was good to find a normal one for a change. I loved the story line to this, normaly people would make Brendan out to be a saint, so it was good to see him been a right nob head. update sooon please.
    August 17th, 2012 at 01:43am
  • hidans_hoe

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    Comment swap!
    I don't listen to Panic! At The Disco but I guess that doesn't really matter. First of all, I love your layout. It's uber cute. One edit would be that your paragraphs are shorter. They're a little long and hard to read. But other than that, this is a really great story. Keep it up!
    July 10th, 2012 at 08:10pm
  • pixiesticks650

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    Sorry I've been a silent reader so far. I hate to leave nothing but a silly little comment when the author works so hard to write the story. I just felt like you deserved a few more comments than you've gotten so far. This is a really enjoyable story so far, I can't wait for more!
    July 7th, 2012 at 11:01am
  • luminos.

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    This story is really good so far!
    You did an awesome job introducing the characters and I already have a feel for what is going on. I absolutely love accents so I think it's funny that your characters like them as well.
    I really like Malena so far too! She is a really cool character and has a really unique personality!
    June 5th, 2012 at 09:40pm