But It's Better If You Do - Comments

I hope you update really soon.

Awwh, update soon?

yeah you updated... I hope you can update soon.

I really liked this, there's not a ot of Brendan Urie storys. There all about him getting with Ryan, so it was good to find a normal one for a change. I loved the story line to this, normaly people would make Brendan out to be a saint, so it was good to see him been a right nob head. update sooon please.

Comment swap!
I don't listen to Panic! At The Disco but I guess that doesn't really matter. First of all, I love your layout. It's uber cute. One edit would be that your paragraphs are shorter. They're a little long and hard to read. But other than that, this is a really great story. Keep it up!

Sorry I've been a silent reader so far. I hate to leave nothing but a silly little comment when the author works so hard to write the story. I just felt like you deserved a few more comments than you've gotten so far. This is a really enjoyable story so far, I can't wait for more!

This story is really good so far!
You did an awesome job introducing the characters and I already have a feel for what is going on. I absolutely love accents so I think it's funny that your characters like them as well.
I really like Malena so far too! She is a really cool character and has a really unique personality!