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  • sins-97

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    Oh yeah there is deffinetly something going on that connects to either the boys feelings or their sense of worth in the world which ls going to effect who stays and who goes.
    Other than that I really want to know who this She is that Shadow keeps reffering too.
    Love the update and really wanna see the changes on PMTS.
    November 28th, 2012 at 04:17pm
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    Holy mother of fuck you are SOOO not one of the statistics. Really really not and I love you. It is a sad story but always remember it is your story and if you are not happy with it then change it. Put in unexpected plot twists awns random peasants. Do whatever you want with it because you have the power to do so. FUCK SHIT UP AND GO CRAZY. BRING IN A UNICORN AND MAKE HAZEL GO SCHITZO BECAUSE WHATEVER YOU DO I SWEAR YOU WILL MAKE IT EPIC.
    October 28th, 2012 at 08:19pm
  • Spoileddxbrat

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    omfg; good updare :]
    September 20th, 2012 at 09:31pm
  • Lexa

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    Please please please dont kill off Forest. thats just not fair. you cant just kill the main character off like that. this is becoming depressing
    September 14th, 2012 at 06:09am
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    omfg; so much uhm stuff to say. well one why is forest dying why </3 and then kylie blew up on him and shadow controlling his emotions awe :( i would write more but my niece just woke up and is crying lol love the update hun :]
    September 13th, 2012 at 08:11pm
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    Motherfucking fucking fuck. Why must you always make me cry??? Huh????
    I am literally bawling due to that first bit and the last bit with POOR Shadow holding back his little emotions because he LOVES her. Why can she not see that he needs her as much as everyone. Loved the bit where he was going to say that everyone would hate and blame him even more once Forest passed.
    And oh god Fiction just came on my ipod and now i am crying more.
    The bit where Forest and Hazel were talking at the start was amazing and brilliant and I CULD NOT STOP CRYING.
    September 13th, 2012 at 07:25pm
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    Oh god. I couldn't stop laughing when it said Let's go do Colorado. I really need to get my mind out of the gutter. I was so happy when I saw it was an update for this and I literally cannot wait for the next bit.
    September 12th, 2012 at 08:41am
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    i dont wanT A PREVIEW OF THE CHAPTER I rather just wait for it but omg its uhm idk not crazy you can say.? lol cnt wait til you update :]
    September 12th, 2012 at 08:00am
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    I think either kylie or Forests uncle should open the door the avenged and Hazel then they should freak out as they think they are there to like kill them. It would be helarious.
    Loved this update and am so glad it was all from Hazels point of view because I have been craving it lately. Also super glad she is now not being a grade A cunt.
    I will admit that I also love kylie more. There is just something about her.
    August 24th, 2012 at 11:34am
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    Oh god. Uncle... Is Auntie.
    Shit I laughed so hard I had to put down my iPod after I dropped it on my face. I was literally laughing that hard. Im starting to suspect that the Fight For the Body is going to be a lot more drawn out than I originally thought it would be. Also a lot more un-noticeable, like just through the little things about Forest getting weaker while Shadow get stronger and maybe vice versa.
    August 21st, 2012 at 02:52am
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    I am thinking that Forests uncle is either the guy from the field that saved Shadow, the black moving thing(but that was supplied mostly soy brain can imagine the scene and laugh) or someone that looks like Domino.
    Also am so glad that Hazel stopped being a little motherfucker. And all of them are going to Colorado. Where I believe they will be welcomed with closed arms and suspicious faces. Or just nice simple anger and hatred.
    August 17th, 2012 at 10:44am
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    Amazing update ^.^ about time hazel realized she's been a stuck up bitch -.-
    August 17th, 2012 at 05:23am
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    Yeah Shadow crying is just the BEST. Every time it happens I just wanna song a little song about HIM HAVING REAL EMOTIONS. And maybe do a "He's a real boy now" to myself. I can't help it. It's an addiction.
    Nah it was all good. Loved the story time bit as I could totally imagine that happening.
    I kinda wanna know what Hazels and Zacks opinions are over everything. That is if she told him about it. Well when he sees she'd has been punched really fucking hard I'm guessing he'd ask questions about it. Hmmm. I cannot figure out who's side he'd take!!!????
    August 14th, 2012 at 12:17am
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    Yes.! She got punched. Damn she changed /: and awe shadows kissed her \^o^/
    August 12th, 2012 at 06:50am
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    About time Hazel got smacked for being a little bitch, I know that she feels like he abandoned her, but she should have never turned her back on her brother like that! Love Kylie and Shadow together! Can't wait for the next update!
    August 12th, 2012 at 03:30am
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    Dude. Dude oh my god that was so fucking hilarious.
    "I hope i don't get hepes". I fell off my chair when I read this it was that funny. I am actually still laughing a bit now.
    That was just brilliant. Completely brilliant. Bitch Punch. Man. So amazing. I don't actually have the words to articulate how dreaking awesome that whole thing was. I loved every minute and want to rewind time do I can go back and read it again.
    August 11th, 2012 at 08:31pm
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    They did the nasty ;D bahaha. No.? Okay just wondering lol.
    August 9th, 2012 at 09:58pm
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    Right i am going to guess at what happened before they got to the airport. Here goes:
    Firts they went to Zee's house and kicked Hazel in her bitch nuts, then Zack came in all "What the hell do you think you are doing?" and Shadoe replied "Kicking the BITCH in her bitch nuts for Forest," then ZV is all like "Who the hell are you?" and Shadow is all "I'm the guy that lived in your sons head for ages man, Keep up," in this no-nonsense tone of voice that you can't not believe him, so ZV faints and so Kylie and Shadow leave but alas a pit opens up and they are sucked down to hell where a deamon tells them that they have a very special mission to undertake and that Forest has been chosen to be the next leader of the underworld so they both must peotct himand he will help them with whatever they need to ge the job done Blar Blar Blar.
    The end.
    Super good update. Love Shadows attitude. Cracks me up.
    August 9th, 2012 at 09:15pm
  • Lexa

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    when forest leaves Shadow needs to go bitch slap hazel or something
    August 6th, 2012 at 06:50pm
  • Spoileddxbrat

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    Awe good update :) I love how forest trust haylie with his life. I just hope he fixes it with Hazel
    August 4th, 2012 at 07:20pm