Super Nova - Comments

This is for a comment swap. :) First off the layout is perfect and simple. The picture is pretty freak rad if I say so myself.

Just in the first two paragraphs I can sense there is a lot of history in the making of this? The detail is amazing so far, and I'm so excited to read more of this. To be honest I'm getting kind of a olympus feel from this, the book is amazing if you haven't read it you should. I can feel the eerie-ness of the bad weather and how they're very obvioisly concerned.

Also the detail paints a perfect image in my head of the current scene playing out.

"It was far from his manner to act out in fear, for it was said that his laughter in the heavens caused earthquakes on the mortal land."

My favorite line in this entire first chapter, that line alone gave me goosebumps, someone who is so happy all the time feeling fear or sadness is definitely a sign that something is very wrong. It's the perfect detail to add to the beginning.

So far this story has my attention which not many can do, I will probably read more of this even though I don't generally read original fiction. :)

holy moly this is so good. your detail and just literally everything is so phenomenal, I love it. I can't think of anything bad about what I've read so far. The plot is interesting, I love the way you write, and I adore the layout.

I'm also a sucker these kinds of stories. It reminds me of Percy Jackson but not really????? Idk what I'm saying. But I fucking love The Avengers and anything whatsoever to do with The Avengers.

This is just too good ok

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I only read the first two chapters, but wow. I was blown away. This story is great. Your characters seem so alive. I'm not a fan of the Avengers but I do love this story. You're an excellent writer and I love the layout. This was a great read, I loved it.

I. Love. This. Story! I absolutely love the way you make your character seem so alive! They're dynamic and expressive. I am totally hooked on this story. Two chapters in and hopelessly caught. You, my friend, are an excellent writer. Also, I'm a sucker for pagan gods and historical fictions. The lengths of your chapters are just perfect. You add the right amount of descriptions and conflicts but keep some details for later (sneaky you). I hope that you continue to update. I don't want you to rush but I will wait for the next update because it is just that great of a story. I'm not into the fan fictions so much. Just the fact that you put that much effort into your story inspires and humbles me. I hope that I can live up to your example. Thank you so much for being an exceptional author and person.

-AJ

Wow. I've only read three chapters but I will definitely be reading this whole story!
You write wonderfully and also I give you extra points for your wonderful layout, it drew me in to read the story and kept me on the page which is important for readers on mibba! I enjoy your use of imagery and overall this is great! keep writing love!

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Well now, this is interesting. I've only read the first chapter, but damn, if it isn't good at hooking me in. I'l have to save this for a rainy day with nothing to do. You hint at some very interesting plot-lines that will keep me interested in. Apparantly, this is a Avengers fanfiction too, which interest me. Never seen the movie but I've watched the individual ones, so I know enough. The descriptions you use were wonderful and quite flowery, but not enough to detract from the story.

Overall: 9.5 out of 10 (1st chapter).

Wow. I'm going to be honest, though I love the Avengers, I was never really interested in reading Avengers fan fiction due to the plots I've seen. However, your story is something completely different and completely amazing. The writing is beautiful and all the details you put into the characters really puts pictures into my mind. I love your descriptions and the distinct personalities and voices you give all of your characters.

As for the plot, I find the use of Egyptian Gods interesting and I love it. What's also great about your writing is that I can read it and not once was I bored or confused. This is probably the first amazing story I've read in a loooong time.

i never read stuff like this... i was a bit hesitant to read this, for this isn't my type. but I love the idea and this was beautifully written. It's so different, and i love that!!! great job, seriously. you are an amazing author. this is not amateur one bit. it's like you're a professional writer - truly amazing. and the avengers!!! omg. greatness.

Wow. Just wow! This story is so beautifully written. The imagery is just wonderful!! I must admit, I am not a huge fan of Gods and Goddesses, but I was really intreged by this. Also, I loved how you added the Avengers into this! I was shocked when they came up and I almost wanted to stop reading because I didn't think it would be much good after that, But it really turned out really interesting! Your writing was very easy to follow as well, you didn't jump from topic to topic. Great job! Keep writing!

This story was simply amazing. It was well defined and there was absolutely no confusion about what was going on. Thank you for sharing! This is one of the most intriguing stories I have read on here. Up until not I assumed it was a group of amateur authors. Thank you sooo much for sharing I honestly enjoyed this story. Stay awesome!

Wow. I came here from comment swap and I just finished your last chapter. You write with such a dose of voice and imagery - it's absolutely intriguing to read as well as refreshing! Your layout is phenominal and I love how you incorporated the Avengers into the Egyptian God theme. This is one of (if not THE) best fanfiction across any genre I've read so please never ever stop writing :) You're truly blessed <3

God Bless

xoxo

Let me start off by saying that this story is one of the best written I've seen on Mibba.

I never got confused as to whom was speaking or what was going on, which is something a lot of writers struggle with. I am not a part of the Avengers fandom but this story was so well-written that I just had to keep reading. I loved how descriptive the scenes were and how clearly I could picture what was going on in every chapter!

You kept the story interesting; you made me want to keep reading and see what happens next. Not to mention the interesting crossover that you did.

Everything played into each other well, but for some reason I felt like I wasn't getting most of it :/. In overall though, for the parts I did get xD, I loved it. Using Egyptian Gods was like 'o_o...whoa....' in a complete good way though ;3. I just read the first chapter though, but I will continue! lol.

Your descriptions and choice of detail is a complete wow-factor! You've got an amazing way of painting pictures with words that doesn't drag on, and even though I've only read the first chapter, I'm hooked. You've introduced characters without it bogging down the storyline or being way too much as an introduction. I'm not even a huge Avengers fan but I'm really interested to read how they'll tie into this, because from the getgo this has been a really action-packed story!

I bloody love this. The title alone just drew me in and the summary was basically just right on the mark. I love your writing style and the plot and the vocabulary and I may be slightly fan girling right now. I really love this and the characters and your descriptions are good yennow. Like most of the authors these days really lack in that department. I'm not a grammar nazi so I didn't pick up on any mistakes which is good. But yes. I love this. Will continue to read.

Love the layout because it's neat and the first chapter was amazing. I love that you used Gods. It's a very good crossover. The chapters are total length worthy and are long enough to hold readers over until the next update. The details are also very good.

I just read the first chapter and ohmygoodness, it was so good! I am so glad that you decided to use the Egypt gods, I never see them in fanfiction or fiction in general. I'm really excited to see how you're incorporating this with the Avengers (of course my mind can't help but to come up with a few ideas). Bookmarking this so when I have some more time and not half distracted, I can come back and read more/finish!

xox

Omg I'm dying at the end- poor Clint! I'M DYING?! haha but anyway, real comment time.

I remember commenting on this story when there was less than five chapters. Then I fell off the face of the planet and fell behind. But I came back and am glad I decided to take the time to re-read it from chapter one because there's definitely some stuff you've changed from the original chapters!

But I'm so hooked - I just spent the past 48 hours reading this entire story (when I should really be studying for midterms) and this is so different and great and well written- easily the best Avengers fic I've read. Such vocabulary and descriptions!

It's funny. Hayden scattered in the ghettos of Compton (I live five minutes frm there), and Paige in the greatness of Long Beach (I go to college there). So I'm thinking, HEY THAT'S COOL- BUT SORTA SCARY!

Enough of my silly comment. Point is, I was truly hooked (and bothered when I had to depart from my computer and seize reading for a few hours). I was laughing, almost crying, holding my breath, everything! Onwards to the sequel!

your layout is amazing and the characters are extremely well developed. I've never read a story about the Avengers so this was new and exciting :) your writing style is very nice and you are really good at making scenes seem realistic. keep up with the awesome story! :D

Haha. I love Clint and Nova's little back and forth there. Clint's e.harmony quip at the end was funny.

This story is probably one of the best and most interesting Avengers stories I've ever read. It's definitely unique, too. Thanks for writing it. I can't wait to read the sequel. :)