Super Nova - Comments

WHOA! WTH? NOVA'S BAD?!?!?! O____O

Hawkeye saved Thor! <3 "Here kitty, kitty, kitty. LOL!

Hulk throwing Nova reminded me of when he did that to Loki! xD

Mmm...Hawkeye and Nova moment. xD
Practice? o_O PRACTICE?! Oh. ^.^

Omg! So good! ^___^ Loved this chapter! Mostly because of Hawkeye-ness. <3

Fantastic chapter! So Blade has a human form...intriguing. You wrote Apep so well, so evil. It was awesome. ^-^

I DON'T WANT YOU TO END THIS STORY!!!! DON'T SPEAK OF IT!!! DX

Such a creepy, dark chapter. Its got blood, but nothing too gorey, keeping it tasteful and interesting.

When Nova came to Kiami's rescue against Blade, that was awesome! Just umf! I loved it!

Fantastic, powerful chapter as always! :)

Such a creepy, dark chapter. Its got blood, but nothing too gorey, keeping it tasteful and interesting.

When Nova came to Kiami's rescue against Blade, that was awesome! Just umf! I loved it!

Fantastic, powerful chapter as always! :)

Poor Nova. :( She's going blind?? Dx

Fantastic chapter. I'm leary of Nova though. She's so bipolar. -.-

Hawkeye! I love you, but WHY? Don't shoot Kiami! That's not nice!!! -.-

BLADE!! CRAP!!! O_______O

You got Tony perfectly! Hawkeye. <3 His dialogue gives me chills.

NOVA!!!!! HAPPY DAY!!

Holy cow. That has to be one of the most intense chapters I've ever read! I really thought Nova was gone for a second. Just like watching a movie. That was so awesome! Edge of my seat.

OMG! AVENGERS!!!! XD
I flail with how awesomely you wrote them all!!

So many feels for this chapter! I just love how your wrote their actions, totally keeping them in character! I like how they all have their own thoughts on the sisters, but are all similiar. Except Thor. Cocky brute. x3

Wonderful update!

You went from "seven" to "nine", jsyk. lol

Poor Kiami and Nova. :( I feel so sad that Nova is in such pain. :(((

Very excited for the update!

This was fantastic.

Poor Nova. :( I feel so bad for her. Her punishment...ooo. And Kiami! :(

Great update! I loved!

THIS CHAPTER IS SO EXCITING!!!
I love Nova! She is the coolest person ever! xD

The fight sequences are intense, epic! I love it! Blade is an evil BAMF.

NOOOOOOO!!!!! YOU KILLED MYSTIC!!!!! :'O Darn you. -.-

Can't wait for the Avengers(was secretly waiting for when they'd show up)!!!

Wonderful update!

I laughed when Mystic said Nova was on her foot! xD The way you wrote it was humorous! lol

OMG! O_O Persians! Kill the Persians! Nova must be pissed.

The way you described the battle plans and the talking amongst the gods and when Nova begged for the mother's life back...just all so wonderfully written. Praise you and your awesomeness!

Hello! So I got this story off of comment swapper and I must say you are a very, very talented writer. Your words flow very smoothly and make it a pleasure to read. I also love the plot. It’s deep but still fun and exciting to read. A very good combination! Please keep writing because you are really good and I’m definitely subscribing!

Nova's a beast! Literally! xD
Your writing is just so smooth and descriptive. With their movements and the fight...It was awesome! :D

Can I adopt Nova? Can I? Magnificent writing you have, especially in the feline movements. So elegant and just, very uncommon here on Mibba. I'm curious as to how this story will play out once the Avengers come in. It just seems like two totally different worlds colliding. I'm very excited!

I'm not a art of this fandom, but nonetheless, from reading this prolouge already I can see originality. I've swapped Avenger stories before but this one is striking, this one is different.

You made a good job of setting the scene and being descriptive. The sudden shift between land and the Gods caught me for a moment, but I quickly found my place again. You're using good grammar, lot's of vocab and it's promising.

My only concern being the possible confussion you may come into later on. Ancient Gods are no easy feet and when adding an Avenger and these two characters in the prolouge and oh my, so many characters, not to mention this Mystic lady. My advice is to plot, plot, plot. Sometimes less is more.

I cannot describe how much I already love this. For one, I am confused but I've always loved the whole God & Goddesses stuff. And now you're pairing it with the Avengers? Win. But also, if this was an original story, I'd still love to read it too.

I absolutely adore your writing/description/terms, and your dialogue. So elegant and sophisticated. Update soon!

A little confusing with the gods and goddesses, but that's because my brain is quite murky this evening. It made sense the more I read. :)

And so beautifully written! I love how you described everything. It was quite original. Very awesome!

I am so sorry to say that I am not part of this fandom in the slightest, therefore I found it a little difficult to grasp! I do, however, think this is really well written and though this is a fan fiction, I feel that the content is quite original, for a change! I really liked your layout too! It's nice to have a layout that makes the content legible and ultimately it's a much nicer read as its easy on the eye! Really well done! :)

I hate to start off like this, but I found the disclaimer in the summary to be a bit unnecessary considering that they aren't require on this site and since this is labeled as fanfiction, I can assume that you don't own any characters that I may recognize.

Moving on to the actual content of the story, I thought you did an amazing job of setting the scene and immaculately describing the setting in the perfect amount of detail. I really enjoyed the style this was written in because while it wasn't too stiff, it wasn't incredibly casual or sloppy, and that was a refreshing change of pace. The concept behind this seems extremely intriguing as well.

The only concrit that I have, granted there's only the prologue up now, is that because I'm not familiar with the fandom, I wasn't really able to get a grasp on the characters you've introduced because there wasn't much characterization or physical descriptions in the prologue.

Overall, I found this to be an enjoyable read, and I wish you luck as you continue working on it :)

Wow this is a really good start! I'd suggest that you'd make the font just a little bigger though? I had a little bit of a hard time reading it... I'm so subscribing tho!