Captivated - Comments

i ABSOLUTELY adored this!!!!

Seriously loved this. Their "relationship", for lack of a better word, had me so extremely giddy I couldn't help by smiled the entire time I was reading! I love that you made it short and sweet, no dragging things out and NO awkward/childish moments that seem to be so popular with 1D stories these days. Loved it, loved it - definitely reccomending it.

Please post soon

This is fucking great. :D

reading this right now and decided to comment since the fancy sidebar thingy is right here! absolutely loving the tweets. i'm a firm believer that twitter can work wonders.

also thought it was hilarious that Aimee played 1D while Liam was over

omfg. I feel like crying, it's like my dog just died. I'm going to miss this story so much.
Please please please write a sequel! Until you do, I'll be spending my time writing a petition.....
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. I'm so sad, I can't even express it.

Oh my god. I can't even. I would probably cry if you wrote a sequel for this story, Just saying. I seriously just adore every aspect of this story. You honestly have an incredible way with words. And I don't know. I think you've kind of rendered me speechless. You've got a great talent and I look forward to reading more of your work :))

SEQUEL PLEASE!! (;

LMAO, no I kid. Seriously now.

Thank you so much for writing this for me and being so flawless I almost can't handle it. I was giggling as usual as I read this I'll have you know. I can just imagine Liam, omg, standing in a gym like a lost puppy waiting for me to get there. WHY do you have to get me that mental image?

At this point I'm pretty sure when I die my headstone should just say WHY.

It had been a long time since he had last spoken to her, and he wondered if she had started dating anyone. Jealousy mixed with anxiety bubbled up in his throat, and he forced it back down by telling himself he had no possession over this girl. He had spent a grand total of twenty-four hours with her, tops, and he felt like a creep even thinking that he somehow deserved her more than any other bloke. HEEEEEEH.

Stupid me, thinking I can go in there, see Liam, and tell him I don't want to start anything. DUMB BITCH.

Striking the bag with uppercuts and jabs like his life depended on it. It was clear he didn’t come prepared to work out, seeing as he was shirtless with a pair of faded blue jeans hanging loosely on his waist. His black t-shirt was tucked into the back pocket of his jeans, revealing every glorious muscle. “I hate you,” she said aloud. WELL THAT SUMS UP MY RELATIONSHIP WITH ONE DIRECTION, DOESN'T IT?

Puppy Payne getting catcalls in a gym. I CANNOT.

STOMPING MY FOOT. Accurate.

She shook her head and walked into her bedroom, seeing Liam dozing off on her bed. She almost jumped in surprise, the voice in her head having convinced her that he was long gone. Liam shook himself awake, having been coherent enough to hear the floorboards creak as she entered the room. “Hey, sorry. It’s been a long day,” he grinned, sitting up and stretching a bit. PUPPY.

Ugh, he wore himself out because he flew straight out to see me. Why do I feel guilty? LMAO!

I’m guessing you liked what you saw then?” Liam responded, his voice just as quiet as hers. CANNOT COMPUTE LIAM TRYING TO BE SEDUCTIVE.

This time it was he who was blushing, and he leaned in quickly to kiss her in order to hide it. That's more like it.

“I think that can be arranged. Now that you’ve laid a few of your ground rules, I’d like to lay one of my own.” "Okay.” "No more talking about anyone or anything else until we finally finish what we started in that sauna,” he insisted, running his hands along her curves. He looked into her eyes, giving her that deep puppy stare that she was beginning to grow quite fond of. HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH.

Ugh I love this so much, and seriously, the idea of a sequel will never be frowned upon by me. Thank you for writing this sweet and sexy little story because IT NEEDED TO BE DONE.

<3

sequel please !!! :)

“No more talking about anyone or anything else until we finally finish what we started in that sauna”....... I died.

Aimee, I loved this so much. I thought it was so amazing. Very well written. Sequel needs to happen. Nowwwwwwwww. I NEED MORE LIAM IN MY LIFE.

SEQUEL!

What do you mean one chapter left??? I love this story!!! Keep it up! Your writing is fabulous and the characters are portrayed wonderfully!

Omg! How exciting !! Don't leave is hanging for to long post soon please

Eeeeek! I can't wait to see what happens!!! :) update soon!

I'm freaking out right now. I love Liam. He's such a perfect son of a bitch. I'm sitting there reading, trying to think of scenarios as to why he wouldn't call her. I mean he was so sweet and awesome that night and then bam, he's blowing her off. And the twitter thing... perfection. I wonder how crazy the teeny boppers went when they saw that! I love this story. I'm 100% captivated! ;)

OMG. just, OMG. I can't take the excitement, they mut be together!! ARGHHHHH.
Please update soon. Like seriously, please.

Oh my gosh! OH MY GOSH. Only one more chapter? How about 500? Just saying. I LOVED this update. And this cliffhanger is so intense I can't even handle it. The twitter thing is so adorable! I can't handle this. You are incredible.

Ugh, I love this story so much! The twitter thing was so cute :) Can't wait for the next one!

I feel sorry for story me, having no idea who One Direction is. Stupid girl, totally blind is right! Story Aimee is a dumb bitch too because even though I don't know Liam's reasons for not calling AND that she's just trying to protect her friend, LIAM IS NO SNAKE. Oh my god, the thought is absurd. “Famous people don’t just die without the whole world knowing about it.” Oh my goddddddddd.

“Them again, Aimee? Do you really think this is the time to be listening to your fucking British boy band-oh my god,” she finished, a hand over her mouth. Alyssa had been trying for weeks to realize why the voice filtering through her speakers sounded so familiar. And now she knew. It was fucking Liam. “You knew! You knew the night you met him who he was. You played this damn CD, and…oh my god.” Yeah, what I said. OH MY GOD.

“You should,” Aimee agreed, confusion clouding in Alyssa’s eyes. “But you should also drop whoever you’ve moved on with like a hot potato if Liam ever comes back.” “You’re terrible,” Alyssa laughed, her friend relieved that at least she wasn’t sulking any more. I CAN'T. OMFG AIMEE. SO YOU!

Funny that Alyssa wants to drive into a tree every time she hears 1D. Same, story me. Same.

LIAM'S TWITTER AIMEE I CAN'T I AM HYPERVENTILATING. HE IS SO PERFECT AND PROTECTING MY PRIVACY WITH THE 'A.' AND I I JUST OMFG.

“A., I’ve looked everywhere, but I’ve lost your number. If by some miracle you see this, contact me please?” and “A., I know I have a lot of explaining to do, but I hope you’ll give me the chance. Hope to talk to you soon?” and “A., I’m coming to town tomorrow. I’m off for a week & want to see you. I’ll be at the place we first met, same time, hope you'll meet me.” CAN YOU IMAGINE IF THIS REALLY HAPPENED. Girls would be like "GOD I HATE THIS A BITCH BUT UGH I HOPE LIAM FINDS HIS LADAY." Cause you can't help but root for him.

I can't with this story. I NEED TO KNOW HOW IT ENDS, holy shit. Love you bitch. <3

Uhm. Wow. I really can't say much because I think you've rendered me speechless. Seriously. Wow. You have talent. I definitely can't wait to see where this story goes. Holy Hannah Montana. Geez Louise. Holy Cannoli. I can't even.