Oh my God...Everyone was...I mean, Ryan just went around, and there were some completely innocent people who were never even mentioned before that had to die, and that's horrible. And then the end-or right before the end, with the final shot-I was just sitting there. Shocked. I honestly did not expect that.
This whole chapter made me just so upset. I hate that Ryan went so insane and that Brendon is now on his bad side and that they can't think of a way to actually stop him and the listing of the scenarios and Brendon's whole thing after leaving Spencer and Jon made me the most upset. (although, I did laugh at, "You vagina!" because it was fantastic) This story is really realistic. I can imagine something like this actually happening, what with the whole attempt at intervention and everything. And I cannot wait for the last chapter.
Hold on: “You vagina!" That, that right there, was wonderful. I know this chapter's serious, but I burst into laughter. Oh my God. And then Brendon and the lighter, that actually made me really sad. Poor guy, look what he's resorted to because of his crazy boyfriend. Ex, I believe, now, but still. And there's only one more super long chapter....Okay. Okay, I can do this. It just has to come into existence soon, because I am dying to know how this wraps up. :)
Oh Ryan, poor baby, he shouldn't be thinking this :c Loved the update!! Update soon :D (by the way, were you the one that made that majestic dolphin picture? just wondering xD)
Oh, no, Ryan, you need to chill out. Bad boy. BAD. BOY. And thank you, Jesus, Spencer and Jon. And Frank is just a big creeper, with his damn alligator pet thing, what the hell is that, Frank, huh, what the hell is that?! I'm sorry. I just...Gah.
I can't believe it's so close to ending. I must see more. It must come into existence so I can fawn. And what is this about Ryan Ross and the knowing of your existence? You should tell me this. :3
Oh my god. Oh my god. Oh. My. God. Oh my god! This is so incredibly crazy and I feel like it has to be accurate. Just, oh my god. They have to stop Ryan. They have to. It must happen. Okay, I'm going to stop saying the same thing now. Frank has an alligator? I find that so incredibly badass... Only two chapters... *deep breath* Okay. I'm okay with that. (ohmygod)
I can't easily form coherent sentences right now, I am just...appalled at how serious Ryan is (in a good way). It's crazy and now Brendon probably isn't going to fight him about it anymore, oh my god. I'm going nuts here. And now I'm imagining how it's going to end... Oh god. And this has become one of my favorite stories, just so you know. It's so fantastic. :3
Oh, damn, Ryan, tell us how you really feel. XD No, but seriously, when he started screaming, I immediately saw how insanely serious he was about this, and there's no way he's going to stop now, just because his boyfriend wasn't doing what he expected. That's crazy. But it's good. And then there's Spencer asking questions and Ryan not exactly ready to give them up, and then Brendon starts to think about needing something bigger to do this. Is he slowly becoming Ryan? What is this?! And then I don't like that Brendon has a strong feeling about where they're going and I don't know crap. XD So, yeah. Oh, it will end so soon? Ah, I must savor these last few chapters. Yes, yes.
Oh, no, it's not complete shit. I must say one thing: The line: "He looks at me then looks to where Ryan is on the stairs." It made me start thinking about Weird Al's Trapped In The Drive-Thru. XD I believe I am nerding.
Back on topic: Ah-dah, the-the violence. I loves it. Well, maybe, if you hadn't have pushed him off that swing...No, no, never mind. I'm pretty sure it still would've happened. I feel so incredibly bad for Brendon still, having to go along with everything, and then there's the fact that Ryan magically got rid of the blood, and that he lied, and Frank just gets rid of things...Insanity.
Not Brendon's mother!!!! (I wish her name was Barbara so I could make a Shaun of the Dead reference) This is just getting so crazy. I wish that I could blame Brendon for telling Ryan about the 'she doesn't want us to hang out' thing, but he didn't know... Anyway, Frank is...really creepy in an excellent way and I like that you added him in. :) I am now anxiously awaiting the next update.
Oh my holy crap, Ryan's insanity is delicious. I love reading it. And then there's poor Brendon, having to follow along with it because, well, that's his boyfriend and he doesn't want to die. I love it. And then I love the line in chapter five, where Brendon mentions how he wishes he had more of a "teenage-couple" experience, and not the "revenge" side of things. I can't believe Ryan just did that and is a-ok with it. And then after Brendon mentioned his mother and Ryan went to the notebook...Oh, Lord. :o
Dude, this is so...awesome. I can't say I've really read a story with a plot quite like this and I'm on the edge of my seat, literally, every time you update. This chapter, my god. So intense. I can't believe how twisted Ryan is and I feel so bad for Brendon being caught up in it. Gah. It's amazing.