Where Have You Been? - Comments

Love this story! Update soon! :)

what did Zack ask? :O

Shane is adorable, okay? And also his daddy, he's adorable too~ Jack better be growing up soon :P

Shane is adorable, okay? And also his daddy, he's adorable too~ Jack better be growing up soon :P

This is seriously such a cute story. And sad at the same time. I love that you take the time to add necessary details unlike some stories that seem to drag and lead to no where. The same goes for the character development you're creating. This is a really good story so far and I can't wait to see what else you write. Update soon :)

This is actually a really cute story, nicely written too! :3
I really loved the first chapter, how Jack was being all adorable...calling him son even though he wasn't supposed to..tehehe..though going on the second chapter I've started to feel a little bad for him, for being in such a situation and having such a hard time doing things right for Shane :c

I'm ready to hit Barakat whenever he starts to make a mess in this story~

i hope jack wouldnt screw anything here :3