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  • This.Is.Me.

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    I loved the update!!! Keep them coming;)
    July 20th, 2012 at 11:05am
  • notllamadelrey

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    GREAT story. please update soon. and congrats on graduating!
    July 16th, 2012 at 04:39am
  • nobodysnoone

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    i LVEO this story so glad tehres a sequel please update son? thankss
    July 12th, 2012 at 03:48am
  • woahwoahwoah

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    I hope nothing bad happens to her now that she did that
    July 10th, 2012 at 08:56am
  • blasttyrant

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    Fucking finally!
    I love your updates.
    July 10th, 2012 at 05:34am
  • This.Is.Me.

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    I love this story:) Please update soon!!!<3 x
    June 23rd, 2012 at 12:07pm
  • morganYDGN

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    hey, i'm a big fan. love that there's a sequel. you're doing good so far.

    and i just wanted to let you know i tried to go to your trailer that you put in the first chapter and it doesn't seem to work. it's saying it's not found. just wanted to let you know. (:
    June 21st, 2012 at 07:16pm
  • Caitosaur.

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    I really like the layout and at first I thought the "facts" bit at the bottom was a bit redundant/spoiler-y, but now I'm rather enjoying them.
    June 21st, 2012 at 10:28am
  • nikkixXsmith

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    i love this story its aw some please with a cheery on top make more it truly is a beautiful story........up date soon
    - nikki
    June 21st, 2012 at 01:05am
  • TheGoodLlama

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    I love this story. Thanks so much for the update :)
    June 19th, 2012 at 11:21pm
  • Caitosaur.

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    The first chapter was done very well and I can tell that a lot of effort went into the descriptions, I just wanted to point out:

    “Reagan Potter, you have always known exactly what to see. See to it that you teach Lucius how to use his tongue.”
    <-- exactly what to say?

    "His blue eyes found mind," <-- mine

    "but when Narcissa touched his wrist tenderly, nodding her head, he came too." <-- I always thought the expression was 'came to'
    June 13th, 2012 at 11:22am
  • lumosmancer

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    Yay, first chapter and it was great! I loved how well you describe everything in a way like JKR and i actually shivered when reading the first paragraph:) Update soon!
    June 10th, 2012 at 11:46pm