Safe and Sound - Comments

I loved the update!!! Keep them coming;)

GREAT story. please update soon. and congrats on graduating!

i LVEO this story so glad tehres a sequel please update son? thankss

I hope nothing bad happens to her now that she did that

Fucking finally!
I love your updates.

I love this story:) Please update soon!!!<3 x

hey, i'm a big fan. love that there's a sequel. you're doing good so far.

and i just wanted to let you know i tried to go to your trailer that you put in the first chapter and it doesn't seem to work. it's saying it's not found. just wanted to let you know. (:

I really like the layout and at first I thought the "facts" bit at the bottom was a bit redundant/spoiler-y, but now I'm rather enjoying them.

i love this story its aw some please with a cheery on top make more it truly is a beautiful story........up date soon
- nikki

I love this story. Thanks so much for the update :)

The first chapter was done very well and I can tell that a lot of effort went into the descriptions, I just wanted to point out:

“Reagan Potter, you have always known exactly what to see. See to it that you teach Lucius how to use his tongue.”
<-- exactly what to say?

"His blue eyes found mind," <-- mine

"but when Narcissa touched his wrist tenderly, nodding her head, he came too." <-- I always thought the expression was 'came to'

Yay, first chapter and it was great! I loved how well you describe everything in a way like JKR and i actually shivered when reading the first paragraph:) Update soon!