I love the idea of this story, i really hope you choose to continue it. I love the name choice Linc. this leaves readers wondering what will happen. Where they are now. Who they are what they have with each other.again i hope you choose to continue the story. On a smaller your first sentence is a little weird is thing suppose to be in it twice. Perhaps i misread. Any way it could form into an awesome hard to put down read if only the future work was put into it.
January 28th, 2015 at 07:42am