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After reading this, I was terribly depressed to see that the status of the story at the top of the page read "done, son." This can't be it. I need more. I need answers.

How did these two end up agreeing to meet each other? Is this a blind date? If this girl is such a catch, why did she need a blind date?

What will her first words be to him? Will she be nice or rude? Will she pay for dinner? He probably couldn't afford to right?

I need answers! I finally find a story that is actually well written and draws me in and I'm left out here on a hook

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After reading this, I was terribly depressed to see that the status of the story at the top of the page read "done, son." This can't be it. I need more. I need answers.

How did these two end up agreeing to meet each other? Is this a blind date? If this girl is such a catch, why did she need a blind date?

What will her first words be to him? Will she be nice or rude? Will she pay for dinner? He probably couldn't afford to right?

I need answers! I finally find a story that is actually well written and draws me in and I'm left out here on a hook

Okay, so this isn't usually the type of thing I go for, and, to be honest, I wasn't sure how I felt as I read it. Like the girl in the story, I felt the story was simply beautiful. You described the two characters so well that I could totally see them as if they were standing before me. I was somewhat upset that the poor boy/guy was given stares (I mean, how rude! But it's human nature, I suppose.) I was pulled in and find myself wishing to know more. Wonderful job. You have a gift with words

Dear author, I'm glad you explained what the title meant cause honestly I had no idea. Lol Once I saw thd first word being "tragic", I started laughing cause I remembered the advertisment on TV in Greece, it was a really funny one but on to the story. I found no grammar/spelling mistakes and that was enjoyable. I wonder who that guy was and why afterall she believed and thought, she waved back at him in the end. Unanswered questions, much. Honestly speaking, the end took me by surprise. At the status you said this story is done but it seems far from it. The chapter fits better as a prologue than a oneshot. That's all from me so bye. ~Marian.

Dear author, I'm glad you explained what the title meant cause honestly I had no idea. Lol Once I saw thd first word being "tragic", I started laughing cause I remembered the advertisment on TV in Greece, it was a really funny one but on to the story. I found no grammar/spelling mistakes and that was enjoyable. I wonder who that guy was and why afterall she believed and thought, she waved back at him in the end. Unanswered questions, much. Honestly speaking, the end took me by surprise. At the status you said this story is done but it seems far from it. The chapter fits better as a prologue than a oneshot. That's all from me so bye. ~Marian.

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Well first of all this girl needs to shrink her ego drastically.Also I like the layout it's simple yet nice and makes the words more enticing to read.But I want to know who the guy is.Why is she watching him so closely,why is she examining every part of him?But I do like the last sentence where she waves back when he waves.But who is he!

I love the layout for this! It's so simple and clean, it doesn't drag your attention away from the words. I didn't notice anything wrong with spelling or grammar, although in some places it was a little wordy. But we are all guilty of that.

I love your vocabulary choice and the ending was a superb cliffhanger. Good job, I hope I see more things like this!

I was wondering when comment swap was going to give me one of your stories. Haha. This girl clearly has a gargantuan ego goin' on and I'm interested to discover why, and what the significance of the boy is. I agree with the comment below about hoping it's not a one-shot, because that's way too much of a cliff-hanger type of chapter conclusion to be the end of the whole story! You have quite a way with words; I could clearly picture everything in my head as I was reading. The word choices were splendid. You're quite the wordsmith :)

That was pretty legit c: I liked it a lot. Even though I'm curious as to why her ego is so inflated I wont complain about what you give us. It was pretty absorbing. And the layout was so adorable it was crazy I could never make something so cute. Basically everything about it was perfect except that it was rely confusing. I have a firmer grasp on it but I'm still not exactly sure about the beginning

I love the layout and the way you write is flawless. It flows well especially with your word choice. I didn't see anything grammatically wrong. I hope this isn't finished since it said, "done, son." Because I'm interested to read more.

I took this a little different then the person below. I knew the girl was a little narcissistic , or extremely, but she was so interested by this character so out of place that even though she was above him, she wanted to know more about him. Perhaps she's missing something more relaxed :P

Well done <3

Okay, so before I start commenting on anything else, I’ll begin with the layout. This is possibly the cutest little story layout that I’ve ever set my eyes upon. The header is absolutely lovely and it’s just aljfkdlsjflkasj. I. Am. In. Looooove. It’s, like, perfection, I swear. I wish I knew how to make lovely layouts on the new layout maker, haha. Anyways, onto the review!

This was absolutely gorgeous. I’m amazed at how gorgeous this because, well, I kind of feel that it’s a nonpareil itself. There is no equal to its amazingness. When I really think about it, it is amazing. Okay, nuff rambling because I can seriously go on all day, haha. Anyways, once again, I’m in love with this. When I began reading this, I was honestly confused as to what exactly was going on, but as I read further, I finally understood. I’m guessing this girl is very judgmental of everyone around her, including this man, because of her beauty, Her ego seems to be way inflated, but at the end, I had a change of heart about her; she doesn’t seem so egotistical after all.

I greatly enjoyed this and I’m still speechless at the beauty of this. I honestly wish it was longer, so that we can find out why this girl’s ego is so huge, but it does well on its own too. A lovely, lovely job done, my friend! <3