July 10th, 2014 at 07:53am
The layout is nice and simple, but I found the text too small to read and I had to default it.
Her and her boyfriend Logan were doing yard work for most of the day, and she didn’t want to be eating her hair the whole time. I really liked this line, mainly because I can totally relate.
I thought this was really cute and I really liked it. Logan and Kandi's relationship is adorable. I like how Logan realizes that this is only one moment in their relationship, and though it isn't anything particularly special, I can see how being together makes them happy. Great job on this!
This story is so simple and sweet. I like the relationship that Kandi and Logan share, its actually so cute. You’ve written this very well.
Actually, while reading this, I kinda had the anime type feeling. They show it in animes sometimes – the yard cleaning romance and stuff. But what was fabulous was the end. I liked it when our lead guy realizes that there would be many more ‘perfect’ moments when he could ask her hand in marriage.
The layout is again simple, but cute, and goes perfectly with the story.
I really enjoyed your work. Recommending it! Good job. (: